Thursday, August 6, 2009

Fall 2009






















Freshman Composition
Critical and Argumentative Writing
Blogging in the Blogosphere
English 100 and 103


FORMAT:
When you blog, in the Title, write your first and last name as you would as if you are turning in a paper to me. Then you do not have to write my name because I know you are in my class. Write what English class you are in whether it is English 52, 60, 100 and what College.

For example, one would write:

Yue Hayes
English 103
Cerritos College
Post #1

Homelessness
Font size
In addition, for the title, pick the topic of discussion, grammar/organization, content, current events, pop culture or literature as a TITLE that we have discussed in class. Write the posts like this: write #1 Post or #2 Post or Post #50, so I can easily keep track of them and how many you write.

Of course, you are welcome to write more than several posts, and in doing so is another form of participation and does count in the participation grade. Perhaps, in class, you may not participate all that much but in the realm of the blogosphere, you can from the comfort of your own home,

* reflect on the day's class discussion or offer up an insight that you found particularly interesting, etc., etc.
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* How does it change the way you think or thought before on the subject?
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* What actions might you take in the future? Anything is open to interpretation.



Of course, I need not go on and on about being respectful towards your peers' opinions and beliefs. If you disagree with another student's views be discreet about it: Do not say so and so is completely wrong because of this and that. Instead, say, I disagree with so and so and here are the reasons why I do. Go after their evidence and support and do not, I repeat do not attack someone else personally. This is supposed to be a forum for everyone to share their ideas and views.

*I will enforce the blogosphere by either deleting your hard work, making an example out of you here in the realm of the blogosphere or in class* . . .

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abstractxbeauty said...

1201?? lol oh well I have nothing to say on here..

abstractxbeauty said...

actually yes I do.. do we post on one speech or both??

a.murphy said...

Andy Murphy
Eng 103
CC
Post#11


what Dreams may come


Having read Dr. King's speech dozens of times and reflecting on it for preceding English classes, its profound effect never falters with each time being read again. Like many others, I have said this speech is timeless and selfless. Being a precher, there are a great amount of biblical references in this. It's amazing to see how this man, who lived through some harsh times of racial segregation especially being from the epicenter of it all, can still see through the unclarity of hate and want unity rather the revenge. His words resonate what a strong and fearless leader he was up until his ultimate sacrifice.
Fast forward the times forty years and Martin Luther King's dream has somewhat come true, with none other than a President who is half black and half white, born in Honolulu, with a surname from Kenya. Now if that is not someone for the people, by the people and that doesn't emcompass what America is then I don't know what or who can? Now Obama's speech is similar to MLK's. His speech was surely not the longest speech given by President Harrison at a wopping 1 hour and 45 minutes or the shortest given by our founding father Washington delievered through 135 words. His speech does recognize some vital points. He knows he can;t do jack $*** himself. No president can. Our government is too much of a circus now with lobbyists bending our country over and legislaters passing laws that don't even come close to the needs our country has. But Obama does give light to what can change it; "we" or us. Our lazy apathetic generation has the power. But, thats the sad part. Our generation which is pretty much being brainwashed by advertisements scorched into our eyes. However, if we do finally break free of the tyranny of Apple, fast food, fascination with brain killing drugs, and dancing with the stars, our country might have a chance. Don't get me wrong though. I like Obama a lot and everything he stood for, but if anyone believes he can do anything big then you have dilusions of grandeur. Now, what is power in this country; Media. Who was the last person who could have controlled this country over with his reign of media? Citizen Kane... er... I mean William Randolph Hearst. Now thats power and regulation that can help our country, but as we see today's media only gives us doubt and despair. God Bless America and hopefully it's years to come. Now thats something to dream about.

Crazymommy said...

Jenny Guzman
English 100
Cerritos
Post hoochies!!

Sandra,

Yes she is changing for time. Now is the time of sex. To be famous I am guessing they (the Women mostly) Have to keep up with their fans. What do fans want to see scandalous clad women. Even men have to be with out their shirts on, so women can enjoy them.

Technically she was wearing clothes just skin color leotard and a black leotard. So she really did not lose any clothes it was just sheer. Like Brittany Spear. The only thing about her I can not stand her.

I feel that demographic wants her a little more "hoochie". Haha It is funny and sad, but it is true.

Crazymommy said...

Jenny Guzman
English 100
Cerritos
Post Dodgers!!

The Dodgers are kicking A$$!!!

John (my boyfriend) is hella happy!!!

14-2 Dodgers bottom of the 9th.

I Threw It! said...

Brandon Hebert
Goldenwest
Eng110
Post: 19

Shakira Shakira(pun intended)

When i was in middle school shakira was not as scandalous as she was now. I remember i used to think of the song whenever, wherever. Shes always been pretty but now just sexy, and thats a big difference. Im not sure if she sold out. Most of my favorite bands have changed their sound. Even I have. All the music i write sounds way different than just 2 years ago. So just because Shakiras music is more mainstream and her image is 'hoochie' doesnt mean she sold out, maybe she just changed her mind and wants to be that way now. I still like old shakira more. ahh she was so hot, now just sexy...and i dont want a porn star.

I Threw It! said...

addendum to my above post.

I agree sex and sexiness is sortof spiraling out of control these days. But this is the cycle of things. If people want a backlash there will be one. I personally prefer more modest chics. I dont know why, I just do. Like the Romans, their debauchery and depravity knew no bounds. Enter the dark ages. massive sexual and behavioral backlash. Therell be another one.

Miley Cyrus...
doesnt she sing country? wtf pole?
haha its the climb right?

For those of us that want that sex culture, its there. But lets not pretend like thats the only choice we have. theres all kinds of niche cultures out there.

Arcie said...

Arcelia Swarr
English 100
Cerritos
Post #15

Sandra, I agree with you that sex is mainstream now. Sex is everywhere and a part of everything we are faced with, but in some cases it has gone too far, in my opinion. I, too, will not buy my daughter Bratz dolls, but I see no problem with Barbie. Barbie now has so many positive images, and a remodeled body, that little girls can look up to. I go to the toy aisles and I see Barbie as everything from a veterinarian to a doctor, even a teacher! I like that barbie has a better image now, and that she has so many roles she can go with.
Now, on to our musicians. I have been a huge fan of Shakira's since long before she ever crossed over in english. I remember listening to all of her cd's without understanding a word she sang, but i loved her voice! The first time I saw her in a video I was blown away by her performance. I watched her dance in ways I did not realize the human body could move! I remember thinking that her skills as a performer were such a great match with her unique sound. I do not think Shakira is a sellout, and I don't think negative of her for wearing so little in her videos. I actually think she has done a beautiful job of showcasing not only her strong vocal talent, but her strong abilities as a performer. I wish i had the amount of confidence to wear what she wears, no matter the negative comments EVERYONE makes about her! All women performers have made changes in their wardrobe. Mariah Carey hardly wears anything, performing or not. Hannah Montana started out performing in short sparkly skirts and outfits I would not let my daughter wear at that age. Look at Madonna in the 80's, wow! Women everywhere are changing their looks. We live in a time where people are more accepting, yet, as women, and men, become more comfortable and confident in their own skin, we as a society are criticizing them for that. Some people may believe in always being covered, no matter who you are, but for the most part, society is now more accepting and ever-changing than it ever has been.

Arcie said...

Arcelia Swarr
English 100
Cerritos
Post #16

Here is my QHQ... but I'm sure it'll take more than one post!

What is it about a big, family sized portion of fresh, hot Italian food that just draws me in? Maybe it’s the aroma of tomatoes, garlic, cheese and all those special seasonings of each unique dish that grabs me and lures me in to eat. What does a large steaming plate of fresh hot Italian food have to with me? That is an easy one, although the food is quite delicious, it is the atmosphere and the company I am with that makes a meal what it is. I love Italian food. I love a good helping of hot, freshly made lasagna, or a generous portion of spaghetti in a hearty meat sauce. I also enjoy a hot dish of creamy tortelloni, or a generous portion of cheesy garlic bread. About 5 or 6 years ago, my dad took our family out to a delicious Italian dinner. In his words, it was “The best Italian food I have ever tasted” and he attempted to describe the restaurant and every little detail that made this place so unique. When he first told us the name of the restaurant, I could not remember the name for anything. How do you remember a name like Buca Di Beppo? I was looking forward to this delicious food and exciting restaurant he had described to all the family, but I had no idea what a treat I was in for! As soon as we walked in the front door I could tell this place was going to be different. There were pictures all over the walls, pictures of families, places, animals, anything you could think of. I was already looking forward to dinner. As soon as we were seated I could not believe the atmosphere of this amazing place. On the way to our table we passed what they call the Kitchen Table. It was a table just big enough for no more than 5 or 6 people, and it was all by itself. Just from the walk to our table, I could tell I was really going to enjoy dinner. This was not just another Italian themed restaurant, no way. Once we were seated, I looked at the menu, which happens to be the placemat. My first thought was, “If I am ordering from a placemat, this place must have some good food, and possibly may even be a bit messy”, little did I know how right I was! The first thing I saw was the small plate serves 2 to 4 people. Wow. One dish serves a small family! I was intrigued by all the delicious entrees they had on their menu, and I could not wait for our food to get there once we ordered.

Arcie said...

QHQ part 2

The first thing to arrive was the cheesy garlic bread. Let me just start by saying, if you do not like garlic, this bread is just not for you. It was loaded with garlic and cheese, and it was absolutely delicious! By this point I could not wait for all the delicious entrees my dad had ordered to get to our table! When our server came over to make sure everything was great, which he did at least 3 more times throughout our stay, he offered to take us on a tour of the restaurant. I thought the walk to our table was amazing enough, but the rest of the restaurant just got better and better the further into the restaurant we went. They had a Passion table, which is in a round cove, separate from the other tables, and all the walls had pictures of couples. There were also pictures of women and men all around, some in less than flattering poses. There were a few other areas of the restaurant that could easily be sectioned off for a party, and then there was the Pope table. I have never before in my life seen anything like it. There were pictures of all the Popes all around the walls, and like the passion table, it was in a huge rounded out cove, separate from the rest of the restaurant. The Pope table was big enough to hold parties of 20 or so, and in the middle of the table was a large lazy susan, with a statue of the Pope’s head in a clear acrylic box. Every bit of the Pope table was true to its name. After our tour, we went back to our table and our food arrived. Oh my goodness was all I kept thinking. Everything smelled so delicious! There was the scent of tomato sauce, garlic, a variety of spices, and fresh hot pasta. My first bite was unbelievable. I could not stop eating that night. I had more than my share of spaghetti, ravioli, cheesy garlic bread, and everything my dad had ordered. I related myself to that restaurant in a lot of ways. Like Buca’s, I consider myself to be quite unique. I may look like many other people on the outside, but once you get to know me, I am full of surprises. Like the different tables they have set up, I too have different aspects of my life that contribute to me as a whole. Like the passion table, I am a very passionate person. I love with every bit of me. I see others for who they are on the inside, not how they look on the outside. Like the Pope table, I have faith in my life. I may not be as religious as others in my life, but I have faith in a higher power, and in the goodness of others. Like every wall of the restaurant that is covered in framed pictures, I too, have a mind full of memories. In my mind I have images of everything I have ever seen or done, and that is how I keep myself connected with where I have been and where I am going. I am me, no matter where I am and there will never be another me, just like there will never be another Buca Di Beppo’s.

Anonymous said...

Monique Gutierrez
English 100
Cerritos College
Post #34

President Barack Obama Acceptance Speech

What I learned from President Elect Obama’s Speech was that change had definitely come to America. No one believed that we would ever have an African American as our president. What he teaches us in his speech is that we should not live in fear and that we can achieve our goals. He made it clear that everyday we accept new challenges. We are faced with many crisis’ daily, for example financial problems. He stated that things will get better and change is not going to happen overnight. I also liked how he responded in a positive way to the people who did not vote for him. “I may not have won your vote, but I hear your voices, I need your help, and I will be your president too” (Obama 18) I remember hearing him say these words and how powerful they were. “To those who would tear this world down-we will defeat you.” (Obama 19) I got goosebumps and I am sure the audience did too. This speech is a moment marked in history, one that no one believed would ever take place. I thought it was very touching how Ann Nixon Cooper got to vote. She has seen a lot in her 106 years. She got to participate in history. Her vote counted. In conclusion, what I learned from this speech is that you should not let anyone tell you that you cannot do something. Believe in yourself. There will always be naysayers. But, as long as you believe in yourself, that is all that matters.

Arcie said...

Arcelia Swarr
English 100
Cerritos
Post #17, or 18, depending on how you count the 2 part post #16

ok, now that I have posted my QHQ, like I forgot to do before, and I responded to the Shakira issue, on to my homework!

I really enjoyed Martin Luther King's speech. It was very well written and filled with a great amount of passion and belief. He knew that one day people of every race would be living amongst each other. He knew there would be change. He had much more than a hope for the future, he knew it would happen. He was willing to stand up for his faith in America, no matter the consequences. He knew that he would not be able to simply sit back and wait, he was pro-active. With a strong man like him leading the way for such a powerful movement, there was no way things would not change.

Now, fast forward to Obama and his acceptance speech. Obama was a very real example of just how much America has changed. He even stated in his speech how much his life has changed. He talks about his upbringing with his grandmother and talks about how his idea of running for the presidency became a reality, and how he became our president. Obama is a very good example of how one can go from having a thought to making that thought their reality. He proves that anyone can achieve what they set out to achieve. Obama also has a wonderful way of delivering any speech and winning over a crowd. I really like how he made reference to Ann Nixon Cooper, who was 106 years old at the time. I liked how he used her lifetime as an example of the change that America can create. By using the past as an example of what he can do, and have done, he is trying to create a new hope within the nation that we can make the changes we need to be a better and stronger country. He is trying to inspire the people to not give up hope, and to understand that what needs to be done will take time, and a great deal of effort, but it can happen, just as King tried to inspire the people to keep their hopes up and to not let the fight make them bitter and fill them with hate.

LuLu24 said...

Edilu Medina
English 100
Cerritos college
Post #13

Is Nyquil the new drink at the bar?

This Tuesday has been from bad to worse, my coughing got worse, dillemas at work and the cherry on top family drama! Seemed like the day just kept adding up, so I'm putting hope on Mr. Nyquil that he would cure me for tommorow.By the way I did not know you had to be 18 to buy nyquil, my dad usually buys my meds but I went to buy it today. When the girl scanned the nyquil she asked me if I was 18. I Laughed and said yeah why? she stated kids get drunk of nyquil, so when they say you want syrup? that means nyquil syrup.. I was like wow seemed an odd thing but a fact for sure. Ok now I'm off to sleep or should I say drunk sleep? Lol recovery awaits I hope for tommorow I don't really want to be sick and cough up a storm in class. That's the Lulu thought for the day.

brenda flores said...

Brenda Flores
English 100
Cerritos College
Post #?
MLK Speech
One of the greatest speeches ever written. I am always happy and get emotional whenever I hear or read this speech. I feel that this speech was the most powerfull thing that helped the civil rights movement of the 1960's. I like the fact that it sounds similar to a sermen and that he sounds like he is preching to the choir. What I would give to have witnessed this speech in person. I am sure the people in that audience could feel the change that was comming as he was saying I have a dream. Thanks to MLK my culture is accepted in society today. MLK paved the way for every minority to be treated equally.

brenda flores said...

Brenda Flores
English 100
Cerritos College
Post #?
Sandra, I completely agree with you. Ever since her first international hit came out I felt that she was a sell out. I think there is a difference between feeling confident in your skin and using your skin to sell music. She did very well before she started showing off her body but I guess it wasn't enough for her. I personally prefer her old music better, especially her MTV Unplugged. :) Rolling around in a cage and simulating being naked is definately the way to make more money but where is your dignity?

Skagway said...

Zachary Duke
Eng 103
CC
Post ???

I have a Dream speech

Every time I read this, it is always chilling to me. The way MLK uses his words so fluent and powerful. It sends chills down my spine every time. His words are so stirring, imaginitive, and inspiring. no wonder he is one of the most famous speakers of all times

abstractxbeauty said...

Samantha Navarro
English 103
Cerritos College
Post # ….

Speeches

Since the “discovery” of America, many different groups have suffered along the way of colonizing this continent. In “I have a dream,” Dr. King is describing the residual racism from these times. It took great strenght and courage to take on the world and try to change what was then the norm. 40 years after African Americans began to get some rights, we have a Black president in office. This speaks greatly of how Americans for the most part have changed are able to accept that which might seem different to some, having a greater perspective in people. Racism is not as severe as it once was just a few decades ago, but there is still improvement that can be done.

Obama speaks of a different kind of challenge that our country is facing. His speech did not emphasize his being the first African American President, though this fact is a great leap from the time of Dr. King’s speech, but he does emphasize the fact that we are a changing nation. We have the power to transform our nation for the better, as a whole. We are now paying the price for mistakes that have been done by our last President. America’s hunger for change placed an optimistic President in office. Though racism is still alive today, we have an economic crisis, among other things, that we must surpass. I placed my faith on Obama, and I believe that his compassion, optimism, and drive to change the course our country has taken will put us back on a better track than before.

dylanpatan said...

Adrian Moreira
English 100
Cerritos College
Post #16

President Elect Barak Obama's Speech

I remember the day of the election. I woke up early to vote before work. As I walked into my booth, I looked at the choices and thought to myself, "Damn. Are we screwed either way?" So I voted, got my "I voted" sticker and went off to work. When the results were in, and Junior Senator Barak Obama won I thought about what that meant for America the Beautiful. I did not listen to the President Elect's speech that night. In fact, this is the first time I have read it, or heard it (I watched it on YouTube).

This speech is well written and was so eloquently said. President Obama has a way about how he speaks. With a sort of smug elegance. There is no doubt that this man can speak. And that night he spoke.

This speech talks strongly about change. A change that cannot happen without us, the American people. Sort of like when former President John F. Kennedy said, "Ask not what your country can do for you - ask what you can do for your country." This change President Obama spoke of cannot happen solely in Washington. It has to happen with us also. Like Gloria Anzaldua wrote in How to Tame a Wild Tongue - Paragraph 26, "Awareness of our situation must come before inner changes, which in turn come before changes in society." Real change starts with awareness. And we cannot make a change in our society without making a change within ourselves either. It does not matter who the President is. Should there not be change regardless? A change for the better? For a better tomorrow? For the generations to come? Like it says in line 20, "For that is the true genius of America - that America can change." We are lucky to live in a country where we are given the ability to change when needed. The chance to be different. The right to be human and happy with whatever choices we decide.

Although I am not a huge fan of President Barak Obama, I am a huge fan of the United States of America and an even bigger fan of the freedom we are provided here. Like Dr. Martin Luther King Jr. said on a warm summer day in 1963, "From every mountainside, let freedom ring."

Belinda said...

Belinda Reed
English 100
Prof. Hsiao
Cerritos College

M.L.K.Speech/Prayer

Good Morning, I remember watching this on TV many years ago. But I could'n remember exactly what was said in Martin Luther Kings speech/prayer to the nation. After reading it over and over againg, found it to be quite a ple for peace on earth. I agree, everyone should be treated as equals. However in this day and time,and sad to say, we are not all treated as such. It's impossiable for us all to be treated in such a manner in which he is speeking, because it takes time, meaning that we are all at different stages in our lives. For example, I'm a white girl,who was born to an extreamly poor family. I was taught while growing up that one has to work for what he or she wants in life.I didn't have everything under the sun handed to me on a silver platter either. I've been treated like the minority since the begining, because of lack of money, as well as education.I work hard everyday to make my life better,as everyone from all walks of life should.Encluding the rich and famous.Then we can say we are all equal.

Brittany Williams said...

Brittany Williams
English 110
GWC
Post 18

How to Tame a Wild Tongue

Language - it is one of the most primitive forms of communication. Spanning from generation to generation,  language has been aquired as a means of a basic necessity. It is in this necessity that we are able to relate with one another. Partial to it's region, language has become part of one's identity. It is the Mexican culture who speaks with a Spanish tongue. It is the American culture who speaks with an English tongue. It is in this language barrior that the author of "How to Tame a Wild Tongue" finds her struggle.

It was this particular struggle that I found interesting upon reading the assigned story, for it is not something that I have been accustomed to. The author, speaking Spanish at recess in an English speaking country, recalls being punished with "three licks on the knuckles" (paragraph 3). It was in specifically reading this passage that my eyes were open to the millions of people living in this country that struggle with this particular problem. It is unfortunate that the basic form of communication in which they use is punished by those who look at it as foreign and, therefore, wrong. Before reading this, I had never thought of such thing, but for many people, losing a language is like losing an identity. Let us be more forgiving in dealing with such situations.      

jaime Valadez said...

Jaime Valadez
English 100
Cerritos College
Post #12

MLK speech

This is a speech that was thought to me over my entire life. This is the first time that i actually read it in its entirety. Martin Luther King Jr was one of the key persons in the movement. All he wanted to have equal rights for everyone and he wanted people not be judged by the color of their skin,but their character. After reading his speech i realized how smart he was and how much passion he put into this speech and to this cause. He held the greatest freedom demonstration in this nation. Not only did Martin Luther King Jr give his heart for the rights of negroes and minorities he also gave his life. And for that he is an american hero.

Kistos said...

Veronica Vasquez
English 103
Cerritos College
Post #16

MLK - I Have a Dream

Although probably a sad thing to say, but this is the first time I actually read the "I Have a Dream" speech in its entirety. It isn't what I thought it to be with high climax throughout the entire speech.

The speech starts off as marking and remembering historical moments with the Emancipation Proclamation being signed. The point being made is that even with the law saying black people are free, they are not indeed. They are still segregated in schools and public places back in these times, where "White Only" signs were hung. King makes so many symbolic references, as the Pay Check they are given (the opportunity by law), but then having it "bounce", or show that there are no funds that actually came with it (the discrimination they still see).

He notes many references from the law itself, and mostly how all men are created equal. Although the speech was meant to excite and motivate the crowd, he made it clear that it should all be done with dignity, and to not let their emotions make them commit any type of illegal crimes which would hinder the whole purpose. He also recognizes that there are white men and women in the group that show support, and note that they too understand the injustice flowing around.

His speech hits a high climax when he talks about his dream, that indeed is the dream all Americans have, not just oppressed groups. The dream represents freedom, and what the constitution was meant to establish on its people. He is in no way going against the law or the United States for that matter, but wants to unite everyone and be equal.

Christina said...

Christina Arredondo
English 103
C.C
Post:9

In the story "How to Tame a Wild Tongue", authored by Gloria Anzaldua, it is about how English speakers ("Americans") want the Chicanos/Chicanas to learn the english language and speak it perfectly. For example, when the author was trying to pronounce her name, the teacher sent her to one of the corners of the classroom and told, "if you want to be American,speak 'American.'If you don't like it, go back to Mexico where you belong." Speak American? Since when is American a language?.. When I read this story if shows as if the "Americans" want for the Chicanos to forget their culture and only speak english. I think that is not right. Both, the english speakers and the Chicanos should stop being prideful and find a middle ground.

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Michelle Pachas
English 103
Cerritos College
Post#7
Obama's acceptance speech

The thought that I lived through the voting of an African American into presidency still fills my spirit with inspiration. When I was younger I remember people saying “maybe someday there’ll be a black /woman president.” To me “someday” was a way of saying I hope but at the same time doubt. Not only did we elect a black man into office but he was running up against a highly qualified candidate who was a woman. When listening to Obama give his acceptance speech I felt a sense of pride. As he talks about Ann Nixon Cooper’s life I began to notice how many historical events have taken place during my short life time. From September 11th, to the current recession, to the right for legal marriage being given and removed to gays, along with many others. It amazes how things can change for the better or worse in the blink of an eye. The beauty of it all is that we have a say in what comes next. I admire Obama’s honesty when it comes to the obstacles we will now have to face and the motivation he instills in people to better our society. He does not claim to have all the answers. Instead, he drives us to find them within ourselves and through hard work recuperate the America we once had.

[C a r l o s™] said...

Carlos Plaza
English 103
Cerritos College
Post #6

MLK

This also the first time i read the entire I Have A Dream speech. Martin Luther starts talking about how blacks still live a life of segregation and discrimination even though the Declaration of Independence guaranteed all men "unalienable rights" of "life, liberty, and the pursuit of happiness." He then goes on to answer the question of decotees of civil rights. They will never be satisfied as long as they are victims of police brutality, the inability to vote, and as long as their children are robber of their dignity. Towards the end of his speech he states his dream. He dreams that one day this country will be free of opression and that blacks and whites will be united.

Christina said...

Christina Arredondo
English 103
C.C
Post: 10

Going to Meet the Man by James Baldwin, is one of the best stories that I have read and liked. It is very descriptive that a person is able to visualize what is happening in the scenes. Even though it is not the first time that I have read the story, it still gets to me and cannot believe how horrible the husband is. It is a racist, heart breaking, and crucial story. It is about how an anglo police officer who was raised by parents who discriminated against blacks. When he was little, his parents received a news about catching someone, and the they got all excited. Then, his parents told him that they were taking him to a picnic that he will never forget. However, the little boy still did not know what was going on and how come they had such enthusiasm. Once, they were there, there was a massive crowed surrounding one black person who was tied up. The crowd was brutaly, torturing him. In any gruesome way that a person can think of. One of the father's friends with a knife, literally chopped off the man's scrotum. At one point, the child had mixed feelings. He was horrified yet he felt joy. That very scene reminded me of how indians would do their feasts. The white people were the Indians and the black man was the meal. Everyone attacking it and trying to get a piece of it....
It is sad to see these parents were the causes of the child growing up to be a racist.
I saw it very disgusting to see how the child, now a man, had the metaphor of having intimacy and mistreating the blacks gives the same satisfying pleasure. I just could not believe how he related those two.

sonicspeed said...

Freddy Villalobos
English 103
Cerritos college
post #9

MLK "i had A Dream"

Well this is the time i hear read the speech, and just by reading it i could sense how he wanted change. In his first page and a half he speecks the way the "white amaricans" still treat them as if Amendment 14 has not been establish. they gave them freedome but not to the eyes of the white folks. in his speech he speaks of pain and terroe, money and not enough of that. the rest of his speech talks about change were they can all see each other helping one another with out any kind of prejeduce of such sort. his effort alone could have cost him his life during his inagruation. In either case he manage to have support for his fellow black people and some white.

Christina said...

Christina Arredondo
English 103
C.C
Post:10

QHQ

Wow, where do I start, when I was a variety of favorite foods? I at least have one favorite plate from every restaurant, fast food, and homemade meal that I go to. Can I really make it pick from all the dishes I love? For example, I love eating chicken parmesan, barbecue ribs, a club sandwich, a chicken sourdough, beef and broccoli with chow mein, lasagna, sphagetti, tamales, enchiladas, fried fish, cocktail shrimp, etc. However, out of all the plates, the dish that I would consider my favorite would be when my mom makes fried fish with white rice. Yum! I just simply cannot get enough of it. It is the best especially when I add the lemon to it.

Metallidude said...

Eric Contreras
Engl 103
Cerritos College
Post #9

90# on your telephone

I dialed '0', to check this out, asked the operator, who confirmed that this was correct
so please pass it on . . . (l also checked out Snopes.com. This is true, and also applies to cell phones!)

PASS ON TO EVERYONE YOU KNOW

I received a telephone call last evening from an individual identifying himself as an AT&T Service Technician (could also be Telus) who was conducting a test on the telephone lines. He stated that to complete the test I should touch nine(9), zero(0), the pound sign (#), and then hang up. Luckily, I was suspicious and refused.
Upon contacting the telephone company, I was informed that by pushing 90#, you give the requesting individual full access to your telephone line, which enables them to place long distance calls billed to your home phone number.

I was further informed that this scam has been originating from many local jails/prison; DO NOT press 90# for ANYONE.

The GTE Security Department requested that I share this information with EVERYONE I KNOW.

After checking with Verizon they also said it was true, so do not dial 90# for anyone !!!!!

J! said...

Jonathan Aguilar
English 103
Cerritos College
Post #17

MLK- "I Have a Dream"

This speech was unbelievable. I have read it once, awhile back and it still gives me goose bumps. He puts so much imagry in this speech. He paints a beautiful picture with his words. He did this speech in hope to inspire people to move ahead and open their eyes. Not only for blacks, but for white as well. He inspires so many but telling them that they need to keep their heads up and to progress in life.

He says, "We cannot walk alone. And as we walk, we must make the pledge that we shall always march ahead. We cannot turn back."

This is my favorite part of this speech. It is my favorite part becasue a lot of times we don't stick together. We lose that unity and it becomes everyone for themselves and we get stuck. And what Martin Luther King Jr. did for us in this speech was bring us together again. Every now and then we need someone like this. Obama does this in his speech as well. They bring us back out of our shells and selfishness and wake us up. They paint a picture for us and give us an idea on how to make that picture a reality. Martin Luther King Jr.'s speech is very moving and always will be. This inspirational speech will live on forever.

Martha Vazquez said...

Martha Vazquez
English 100
CC
Post 15

I Have A Dream by Martin Luther King Jr.

"With this faith, we will be able to hew out of the mountain of despair, a stone of hope. Withthis faith, we will be able to transform the jangling discords of our nation into a beautiful symphony of brotherhood. With this faith, we will be able to work together, to pray together, to go to jail together, to stand up for freedom together, knowing that we will be free one day"

This painted such a wonderful picture in my head. The imagery he uses in the first part is so beautifully written. I could actually hear the "jangling discords" and the "beautiful symphony". His words about us truly giving our citizens "life, liberty, and the pursuit of happiness" was what I pictured The Constitution of Declaration meant. Not only were these rights to be afforded to white and rich Americans, but also to poor, forgotten people of America. All the words he spoke were with such a peaceful passion. It astounds me to think that a person who had been through so much negativity, could approach this with such a positive, but determined, attitude. His words inspired and calmed a nation of people who were tired of being looked on as sub-human. Martin Luther King Jr. managed to do what so few people can: to create an uprising with "dignity and discipline".

Jan921 said...

Janice Silva
English 103
Cerritos College
Post#10

MLK- i have a dream

What an amazing speech, i got in to it, and i can imagine the power in his voice when he spoke those words.

He speaks at first about when lincoln signed the Emancipation Proclamation, how they were free from being slaves, but not how they live their lives. One hundred years later from the signing, the negro was still segregated with discrimination. Even in their own country they cannot live their lives to it's fullest capacity because whites won't allow them too, with the governmemt behind them. MLK belived thet their was still justice in the judical system. "And so, we've come to cash this check, a check that will give us upon demand the riches of freedom and their security of justice". They came to capital to be heard. MLK told everyone not to stoop down to violence, but to use their words and have faith. He has a dream that black an whites will sit down and talk like friends, that his children are not judged by the color of their skin but on their character, that America lives up to it's true meaning and what this country stands for. He wants to see freedom ring everywhere, especially in the most segregated areas, that all men, including black and whites are created equal.

What a powerful speech.

Metallidude said...

Eric Contreras
Engl 103
Cerritos College
Post #10

Obama's Speech

On Tuesday January 20, 2009 President Barack Obama was inaugurated as the 44th President of the United States of America. I remember preparing for watching his speech that night with my family and it was a marvelous speech indeed. I was very excited to be watching it because it was inevitably a momentous time in history that would be remembered for ever.

His speech gave me the chills as i was watching it. I was tuned in to that speech so much like there was nothing in the world that could distract my attention away from it.

Barack Obama's speech is one of the most uplifting and inspiring speech I have ever heard. He talks about how he was able to be at the position he is in now (the president of the USA) and how other people helped him along the way. He talked about how America is STILL the land of oppprtunity where one can still restore prosperity and promote the cause of peace despite the doubts by those tell us that we can't.

Very inspirational, very motivating, and it does an incredibale job at uniting people from all the corners of America in to one unified people. Put simply, it will always be one of the best speeches aver given.

Tali_ya52 said...

Obamas speech:

It is really inspirational the way it focuses on change and challenges Americans to make the change we need....i like the real example he uses of the 106 year old woman.

my favorite part is the quote about when his daughters make it to the age of the 106 year old lady ..Cooper, he asks what will be the change we would have made and its a good question, what will we have done to improve the world.

I like his opening part where he describes the lines and how all the young people and average people who do nto usually vote went out and voted for him because we thought this time our vote would help towards the change, we could make a difference this time and when you think about it so many peopel were united on the fact that we were going to have a black president, the time for change had come and we were gonna make it happen and everyone went out and cast their votes, more people voted than ever, and i think if everyone could unite like that for things like global warming, or the war on poverty, or to have money spent on curing diseases instead of fighting a war how strong we could be, what a difference we could make, its mind boggling how much we want change but not enough for us all to join together and make it happen and i think that is what Obamas is challenging Americans to do. It is sad all the stereotypes and beliefs and ideals and drama we cause that prevent us from uniting together. If only everyone could realize that America is the most beautiful because of its diversity and variety and freedom...

Gabsters101 said...

Gabriela Tovar
English 103
Cerritos College
Post #15

I HAVE A DREAM by MARTIN LUTHER KING JR.

When i finished reading the speech it came to my mind how terrible African Americans were treated. I started to compare that they do not even compare to the time when Mexicans were turned down on schools, swimming pools, etc. I think black people had it worse, at least Mexicans were not slaves, figutively we are, we get pay little to do a job that a "white" person can do but its too lazy or dirty. We are being taken advantaged but not as much as a black person being "auction" to work.

Nineteen sixty-three was the day the world change, did it changed for good? I think black people have more liberty... but i still think that they have so much anger hidden inside them because their own people were treated decades ago... I know that if it was not for Cesar Chavez, we would not have the "freedom" we have today, but i know i have a grudge inside me... I have this play in my head where white people are the ones controlling the world, asians are the ones who do the math, blacks are the ones who have an okay position, and Mexicans are the ones who have the dirties jobs...

The only thing i can compare to a black person that if it was not for Cesar Chavez and Martin Luther King Jr. we would not be in the position we are today...

As the presidents say, "...and may God Bless the United States of America"...

yeah right....

Anonymous said...

Sarika Vaswani
English 103
CC
Post #idk

President Barack Obama Acceptance Speech

It's weird how just some years ago, people either completely ridiculed the idea or had high hopes in one day having a black president in office. I never thought I would see the day...
I remember when I first heard his acceptance speech. I was blown away. His integrity, honesty, and optimism gave me a sense of hope. When I think Barack Obama, the one major word that comes to mind is, CHANGE. We all desire change, but we cannot depend on Obama alone to do this. Paragraphs 16 and 17 stood out to me the most. I especially liked it when he said, "This victory alone is not the change we seek- it is only the chance for us to make that change. And that cannot happen if we go back to way things were. It cannot happen without you (16). To me, these words sum up the entire purpose of his speech. We have finally got the ball rolling to bring about change, so we must keep going and make the efforts and take the actions need to get what we want in this world. I found his speech to be eloquent, beyond inspirational and beautifully said.

In comparison to Martin Luther King Jr's, I Have A Dream speech, it's amazing to see how things have changed thus far.

Martha Vazquez said...

Martha Vazquez
English 100
CC
Post...um, 15?

QHQ

Q: Why does the smell of a bowl of boiled beans garnished with fresh onions and jalapenos remind me of being a kid?

H: They were plentiful to a fault as a child.

Q: Why does that smell make me happy and sad at the same time?

A: I would walk in my house and think, "Man, beans again?” It seemed like we had them all kinds of ways. Boiled, refried with onions, refried with chorizo, refried with ham leg...the list goes on and on. They were a staple in our household. I remember thinking back then, "I like beans, but do we have to have them so often?” Now, as an adult, it makes sense. Beans are cheap, easy, nutritious and filling. The perfect combination when money isn't exactly plentiful. We would sit around the table, eating our beans, talking, laughing, making fun of each other, discussing our days and vying for my mom’s attention constantly. It was such a happy time for me. The times my dad would join us, he would have boiled beans with chopped onions and jalapenos on top. That was his favorite way of eating them. Being a small kid, I would want to impress my dad by eating beans just like he did; even with the hot peppers. He would always be proud that I ate the super spicy chilies, and I loved that. My dad didn’t always join us, though, so when he did, that’s what he and I would eat. It was a slight bonding, I guess. Nobody else at home liked fresh onions except me and him; none of my siblings ate the hot peppers like me and my dad would. When the whole family sat down and had beans, it was an event. Beans in a weird way, held our family close. I now realize that our family didn’t always have much, but we always had each other and beans.

Martha Vazquez said...

Martha Vazquez
English 100
CC
Post 17

Sandra:

You're a fellow Pabst Blue Ribbon drinker? Friggin great! A PBR sounds pretty refreshing right now...

Sarai Vazquez said...

Sarai Vazquez
English 100
Cerritos College
Post #14

Obama's Speech

I mus admit that I did not get a chance to listen to this speech the night that he gave it. Not really because I could not but because by the end of the election I was so over hearing about politics and whatnot. But anyways back to the speech. As i read it I felt like it was a really inspirational. It gave the people something to be happy about. They were already happy that Bush was out of the white house and now Obama was here saying all these pretty things. It was good to hear all of his plans he had for the nation. It was a very good written speech and he did a job of articualating it to the nation. It gave the people a lot to look forwarf to in the next 4 years he is in office.

The King in Yellow said...

Jon Croft
English 110
Golden West College
Post #14

Mother Theresa

So Mother Theresa, the quintessential saint and all-around good gal, had darkness in her heart. Not just any ordinary darkness, I mean ADVANCED darkness. She absorbed the darkness of the hobos and vagabonds from her travels, slowly but surely fulfilling her quota.

Upon hearing about this, I deduced that she was not a person of light, but a creature of darkness. Like all creatures of the bleak blackness, she hungers veneration. She even asks her fellow sisters and the other faithful to pray for her. Now you can say that they are just praying for her, in the sense that they hope she gets better, but their thoughts dwell on her. This in turn allows her to infiltrate the cracks in their minds and bend them to her will.

The only thing that saved the human race from a true tyrant was time: she just ran out of it. Starting far too late meant she had to work twice as hard, taxing her body beyond normal limits. She died shortly before her plans could come to fruition. Be thankful they did not, fellow students.

Charleen Chiang said...

Yi-Hui Chiang
English 103
Cerritos College
Post #12

President Barack Obama Acceptance Speech

Though I am not a political person, by reading Obama's speech, I can somewhat get an idea of what kind of person he is and what vision he has for the nation.

In his speech, he tried to emphasized the change. "...they believed that this time must be different; that their voice could be that difference." He spoke to encourage and build people's trust in him. The speech talks about bringing unity among different groups in this country, bring hope to people who have been waiting, and again, bring changes that the country demands urgently.

I like the way he spoke because he did not just tell people the ideal blueprint and said that everything will be perfect. Instead, he also spoke of the probabilities of setbacks and false starts and likelihood of disagreements. He also stated how he will deal with it when there is any disagreement, and that is he will listen and ask people to join the work as a whole. He invited all people, as a nation, to make the change possible; he believed it cannot happen without anyone. I feel that he was speaking not only with confidence but with humbleness.

I think the reason he mentioned the old lady, Ann Nixon, is that through her witness of the change and progress in the history, it reminded people that we deserve to have hope, and we can makes everything possible, and we can change even though we might not see the outcome in a short time. Again, here he try to bring hope to people and give them confidence ,especially in this age when the country is going through one of the worst financial crisis in its history and two wars unsolved.

Throughout his speech, he spoke in a very honest voice. To my surprise, he did not mention a word about being the first elected African American president at all. But we all know that for him, the challenges ahead are great, and the efforts still need to be made.

cathrina86 said...

cathrina afusia
english 100
cerritos college

Okay where did this heat come from? I left to go on my break, and as usual I sat outside in the shade. I was sitting for like 10 minutes and began to sweat! EWWWW that means it is too hot. On top of the heat, I am not feeling well today :(

Amber Decker said...

Amber Decker
English 110
GWC
Post #4
How To Tame a Wild Tongue was an interesting read. Personally, I dont really identify with it because I have never had to deal with the struggles of limiting myself in terms of language. I only speak English and have only traveled to a non English speaking country once, therefore I know not how it feels to 'loose' a language. But even though I dont identify with the author, I do appreciate her honesty and it makes me understand the struggle that millions of people have with language barriers. I believe that everyone, at one point or another, gets frustrated when complications arise do to language. But so often we overlook what someone else has had to do to get where they are, that it is really difficult to leave your culture behind.

LuLu24 said...

Edilu Medina
English 100
Cerritos College
Post# 14

MLK
"I have a dream " what words can say more to a crowd of hope. Martin Luther King made that statement and its one of the most remembered moments in history. On August 1963 he stood on concrete giving a speech, a sermon to stand the rights and the freedom. As reading his speech the first sentence says everything "I am happy to join with you today in what will go down in history as the greatest demonstration for freedom in the history of our nation." Throughout the speech he states the problem and shows the resolution.
I look up to Martin Luther King not only as a hero but a man whose words changed the world.

Raul said...
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Raul said...

Raul Moreno Jr
English 103
Cerritos College
Post: 12

Sarika, I read your post on Obama's speech and I just wonder how anyone can measure a man's honest and integrity by a speech or by the media's portrayal of him. Sure, I didn't vote for him, and I still think his silver tongue gets him an undeserving and ignorant free pass among so many. My question is generalized though. How can any man's integrity truly be judged by the way any of the common people have learned about this man in particular. The circumstances make truth nearly unimaginable.
The man is a wonderful speaker, and he's definitely not stupid. What are his approval ratings saying now though? Was there really integrity in all that he had to say up until the elections and henceforth? Are we out of the war, or are our forces in Iraq doubled?

This question isn't even for Sarika alone. Rather, it is open to everyone. Can we take the information that the media dishes out with the belief that they truly seek to enlighten with truth? Can we judge a man's integrity when we have not once had a personal conversation with him? What is objective? What is subjective? Who has a hidden agenda? Who would favor soft and comforting lies to sharp and painful truth?

Does it all even matter?
Unfortunately for us, yes, it does.

☣T Я I N I☣ said...

Maria Ascencio
English 100
Cerritos College
Post #11

MLK Speech

In a sence we've come to cash in our nation's capital to cash a check....This note was promised that all men, yes, black men as well as white men would be guarranteed the "unalienable Rights" of "Lfe, Liberty and the pursuit of happiness." America has given the Negro people a bad check, a check which has come back marked "insufficent funds."

According to the DEclaration of Independence and all, men, including black men should be granted the right of life, liberty and the pursuit of happiness. Since white men were still supressing black men, they had no rights and that is why he says that they got back a check saying insufficient funds.

"Some of you have come fresh out of jail cells. And some of you have come from areas wheere you quest-- quest for freedom left you battered by the storms of persecution and staggered by the winds of police brutality."

When I read this, I felt like I was actually there. The way he paints the pictures of how people were treated and how he says that. It shows that those who have stood up and fought for their rights were thrown in prision. Now they are there, gathered together fighting for their freedom and rights.

Macey said...

Macey Lindsay-Clinton
English 110
Golden West College
Post #8 I think...

How to Tame a Wild Tongue by Gloria Anzaldua

Having only taken up to spanish two in high school, I could not read the parts in Spanish which initially bothered me about the piece, Then, I realized that this was an important part of her message, her connection with the Chicano speakers. As she explained, the chicano people are seen as lowly due to their "mutilation of Spanish." (9) It sounds horrible to be outcasted by your own people because of the language you speak. For Anzaldua to be able to write in spanglish and be accepted and respected for it, eventually, must have been a very empowering thing to her.

What I did not like about the article is her deep stance against the "Anglo" people who are holding down the Chicano people with their "dominant white culture." I personally do not think that it is the white culture holding them down, it is themselves. She holds her self and the other chicano people in such a low regard because it is what she has grown up with and this is what holds them back. Like she says, "I change myself, I change the world," if the chicano people believe that their language is pure and start to respect themselves, then the rest of the world can respect them too. She says that chicanos are afraid of talking to latinos in their native tongue because of their language has been used against them for so long. I think that to empower themselves they need to first gain confidence in this aspect. Gain respect their own culture and see it as something equal and pure, then the latino community would respect them as well.

cellycell said...

Celina Rivera
English 100
Cerrritos College
Post #34

Obama

Is speech was an over thanking to everyone who has helped him become president. There were so many people that got him to where he is right now. Obama speaks of change. He his ready to make a difference especially through these hard times. Have we seen big changes? I would say not big changes, but some small ones. The small changes will eventually lead to the big changes. It will take time and as far as now all we really have is time. Obama in a sense is like Martin Luther King because the both want to make changes. Even if there is not any big changes than nothing will ever change. They both want to point out things that are hidden. I am happy to go through the changes. The little with less can have a big opinion.

cellycell said...

Celina Rivera
English 100
Cerritos College
Post #35

I do and do not agree with Sandra. I will elaborate on this at a later time. I am actually heading out to school.

abstractxbeauty said...

In reading all these posts about language and culture differences, I see that there are soo many points of views out there. It's almost impossible to not have a stereotypical opinion about a certain "group," because for the most part we associate ourselves with people similar to us. I'm glad I can read everyone's opinion on subjects that are usually not spoken about, especially points of view that I am usually not surrounded with because of where I live (a city with almost 100% Mexican population). I try not to get offended by a lot of things being said but I understand we all had different experiences and upbringings. It's been 500 years since all these different cultures started to come together (I am taking a Latin American class so I am studying how Africans, native Indians, Portuguese and Spaniards all came together within a couple of decades). It's a little sad that we still don't unite as just people. For the most part, we still seperate ourselves from each other and still think of other races in terms of stereotypes. My family especially has soo many stereotypes of other types of people and it makes me sad and angry to be associated with that. Hopefully most of us are taking in alot of these different perspectives into consideration.

CaLL ME P :D said...

Priscilla Daza
cerritos college
english 100
post #12

obama speech

i liked how obama called the people out by asking if there were people who still questioned the power of democracy. having us imagine the first time voters, who he called on every race,gender,sexual perference, class etc, waiting in line to vote and make their difference for their nation. he gave the message across on paragraph three that no matter what our category is, we are still all united in the united states of america. i liked how he described the history as an arc and how we can still bend it further toward hope for a better day. though it is short, obama graciously mentioned senator mccain and involved his history of life tied into his speech on paragraph 6. obmama goes on in order thanking his vice presisdent and his campaign managers his wife then us. he goes in depth over his supporters who donated little even though they had nothing. who gave up much of their time who had no more to spare. he gives the victory to them. remembers the brave americans fighting for us. admits the everything might not be resolved in a year or even in the first term but he gives us hope that the change for the better will happen. he mentiond the potential difference of opinions. yet he goes back on reminding us that we are a whole "as one people". and the last of his speech ties in perfectly with the story of ann nixon cooper. her life story was meant to fit in obamas acceptance speech. the obama leaves us with an ending note on everyones mind...without a doubt...yes, yes we can.

Jan921 said...

Janice Silva
English 103
Cerritos College
Post#10

Don't
I can't give up, I wont. I worked to hard. I sit here mad that I just want to go home, thinking how long I can procrastinate my work, but I tell myself don't. I can't give up, my goals are far, but what's near will get me closer, I need help, but then I don't. I cry inside because my goal is so far from me and hearing what others say how what i have choosen is difficult. I have to suffer to recieve the joy, to be in the dark to understand the light, to be on the ground, but using my body to pick myself up again. I don't want to give up. It's not to late, I can do it, but I need my internal motivation back. Come back, please come back, I don't want to go back, not to live how I was. I want to gain and receive instead of letting go, letting go of my goal. I don't want to give up, I'm going to push myself, to pick myself up again. I'm slipping into the dark. Where is my rope to escape into the light. I need to climb, to work my way towards the light. I don't want to give up. Oh God, not again, don't let me do this again. I need a hand, but in order to reach that hand I need to let go. Pride, let go of me. Let it fall into the darkness, you are the reason why I'm this way. Wait, I need to blame myself completly. Don't give up, Don't give up! come on, lets go, don't lose it. Don't Don't Don't!

whitneyyoung said...

Whitney Young
Golden West College
English 110
Post #10

“At His Disposal” by Mother Teresa

Mother Teresa presents herself as a saint, but she has many struggles of her own. She is an idol and a saint to many people. She is selfless and makes many sacrifices. She works from the outside to in by praying for everyone else before she prays for herself. No one had any idea what was really going on with her. On the outside, she showed love and faith, but on the inside, she felt deep emotions and loneness. It was like hell for her. She had no one that could relate to her. I think it’s because the higher up you are, the lonelier you are. No one else can relate to you because you are so mentally high above them. In many ways, she is like Jesus. She gives herself up in order to help others even though it comes with much sacrifice. God seems to humble her, but it kind of seems like he is also punishing her. Mother Teresa gives up her life on a daily basis to help others.

Raul said...
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Raul said...

Raul Moreno Jr
English 103
Cerritos College
Post: 12

Yes We Can

I might only admire this speech for its wonderful eloquence and the one mention of new energy/jobs. The President is one of the greatest speakers of our generation, hands down. He speaks with a silver tongue and he is well aware of that. The masses were hanging on his every word, crying and getting aroused all at the same time, and he gave them these beautiful words. He gave them words to hold onto; he romanced them.
He gives credit to his foes and reaches his hand out to them before the millions. To those who slander him, he suggests unity and collaboration, while at the same time making note that there will always be those who disagree with him no matter the circumstance. He speaks himself into a win-win situation. Should they reach back out, he is credited as the author of unity in this country, and if they don not, then he was the bigger man; he did his part.
What I admire most about this man and this speech, are the things that make me the most skeptical as well. His tongue won him the race, not what he'd actually done as a politician. Many have played him up as a messiah of sorts, and I'm not so sure he's completely turned off by that idea.
He talks about tyranny and liberty in America, even the american Dream, but eventually forces a high level executive of a publicly owned company to resign his position without consideration to those who actually own the company. This leaves me gasping and groping for answers. Is this happening in America? What kind of presidential mandate does this set precedent for?
We are a cynical and skeptical generation; I am cynical and skeptical, jaded. I have so little faith in humanity that I sometimes forget about my faith in God, and I am terribly discouraged by the masses of peoples' idolization... including my own.
I really can go on and on here, so I'll cut it short and save myself from overload.

Let me just say that my distrust was cemented at a point where I wanted to believe some of the beautiful things he was saying. While watching the inauguration with coworkers, I heard one of them say this: "Not only will he go down as the best president ever, but the best person ever!"

To this day, that sentence gets under my skin so deep for far too many reasons to list. I was utterly disgusted and I suppose it may have ruined me for Obama for good. Oh well.

Tien Tran said...

Tien Tran
English 110
GWC
Post #11

Mother Theresa’s ongoing struggle with herself and subsequently her faith is truly admirable. Her willpower to fight a battle meant for humankind is a testament to how far reaching one’s heart can help others. After the discussion in class, I never realized she succumbed herself to such darkness and how she fought a brutal, yet lonely battle everyday of her life. Her decision to give up all worldly desires and to live among the dark abyss that is the slums of Calcutta raised her to a new level of individual strength. Through her own eyes, she could easily relate to the daily struggles the poor had to go through minute by minute, day by day. Because of her groundbreaking decision, she gained a lifetime’s wisdom as she opened up her heart and minds to those who are left to shatter in the shadows of “hell”. The struggles she had to overcome both internally and externally were of a great magnitude that would have brought the demise of an ordinary individual. By far, she is the most selfless figure in history’s timeline.

Jean Carlo said...

Jean Carlo Morales
English 100
Cerritos College
Post 9

President Barack Obama Acceptance Speech

I wonder what Obama has planned for America? I see him doing and saying things that does not go hand in hand with what he promised. Lately, I've been questioning. Does Obama have a hidden agenda? Anyways...

I felt a lot of confidence in President Obama's words. He seems to be so sure that change WILL come to America. I like how he uses us, the people, in the speech. He includes us, the people. He says this is our victory.The people's victory. Like we all contributed to such a great victory. I also like how he plays with his words. It makes me feel inspired like I should involve myself to help change our nation. It almost makes me believe in the promises he is making. Obama talks about differences. He goes on about naming different things that have gone down in history that have impacted the world and the way it changed the world. Then he goes on to question the future of America. What change will we see? and what progress will we have made? I thought this was an important part of his speech because it made me think of the future. It made me think of my family and friends. How will America be in the future and what will it look like.?

marlilou said...

Beatrice Fisher
Eng 110
GWC
Post #8

There were many things that came to mind while reading Gloria Anzaldua's piece. First thing, I may be able to half way pronounce the Spanish, but I don't know what it means. I am Mexican-American. I was born here in California. My dad was born in Mexico but came to California as a four year old. My mother was born in Chicago. Both of their first languages was Spanish but they chose not to teach it to us. My only guess was that they spoke with that bastard Spanish and they didn't want us to be looked at with "low estimation" as they were.

Okay, scratch that. I was thinking about it and thought I should just call my dad and ask him. He explained that he spoke better Spanish than my mom (possibly because he was born there and heard it more frequently). My mom's dad was born in Texas and although her first language was Spanish, she only spoke so-so Spanish with her dad and otherwise spoke English with everyone else including her siblings. So, it was easier for them to speak English to eachother an therefore they only spoke English to us.

Now, I feel like I can somewhat relate to what Anzaldua explains about being looked down upon because of the bastard Spanish she spoke. I have often enough been looked down upon and questioned by other Latinos because I DON'T speak Spanish. It is as if I am a disgrace. They look at me as if I think I am better than them because I speak English without an accent, when all the while I feel like they think they are better than me because they speak Spanish. Strange how the cycle goes round and round. Truly, I could care less. I don't feel like I was robbed of my native tongue because I have no connection with Mexico. Is this sad???

Here is the only place where there is that awkward middle...it is when I am with a Latino and need to say something like tortilla or chorizo or guacamole. If I dare pronounce it as it "should" be I am mocked for "trying" to be Mexican. If I pronounce it like "white" people do, then I am mocked for being white-washed. Can someone please explain to me where or if there is a happy medium? I'd love to know.

Anyway, interesting to read Anzaldua's inner battle. It made me think.

kayla said...

Kayla Marley
English 110
Golden West College
Post 13


WOW, I want to throw myself out the window! I have done so much Statistics homework in the past few hours that my brain is going to explode! I am so exhausted. I had work this morning at 5am and then class today at 12:30 had to take a quiz, which I don’t think I did so well on. Sorry I’m complaining I just had to let it out. OH AND ON TOP OF THAT what a disappointment the Dodgers game was. Oh and on top of that my dad has to go in for surgery next Friday. :/ I’m kind of scared, but I know he will be okay. The good news is that I may be getting a promotion at work soon! : ) *fingers crossed*


Anyways here is my post:
“At His Disposal” by Mother Teresa excerpt from Come Be My Light
This excerpt was a great choice to share with the class. I think that this was such a great excerpt to pick because I think everyone can relate to what Mother Teresa is going through. They might not be having a problem as intense as religion, but maybe a decision one is torn on. For instance I was once put in a situation where I was around a group of people who were drinking. I knew that drinking was not a wise choice but I felt the peer pressure around me. I did not know what to do. I did not want to drink, but when everyone else was telling me that just one was okay I felt awkward. In the end I did not drink, but during that time I was contemplating if I wanted to have a drink or not. Now that is nothing close to Mother Teresa at all, but I can relate to the tiniest bit of her problem. Mother Teresa was questioning herself whether she believed in God. At the time of questioning herself she was two-faced. On one side she shows people that she has faith and love for God and that she is there for the people to tell them their sins. On the other side she is lonely because she has no one to turn to too talk to. She is so busy having everyone else talk to her about their problems that she does not know where to turn. She is the median between people and God, but she herself feels as if she is even below the people because all she hears are the sins that are being told to her. I think that Mother Teresa is a great woman, but while reading this excerpt she really had some issues. So does everyone else in the world though.

I Threw It! said...

Brandon Hebert
Goldenwest
Eng110
Post:20

Mother teresa:

Something i found interesing was what seemed to be a conflict of interest in the beginning of the reading. At first, it reads "darkness was the price of lighting the fire of love". It goes on to establish the breadth of this terrible darkness. Later, the piece establishes the notion that it is terrible to be without god. Indeed that was the crux of Mother Teresa's work, no? But that seems to be in conflict with her internal struggle. Perhaps that was her overall message. Better to be in darkness serving god...than in the false light of the world? hmm...I will read again

Kim _ (^o^) said...

LongKim Luong
GWC
post 10
At his disposal
I think Mother Teresa is a lonely person. Even though she is famous, and it seems that everyone loves her because of her sacrifice for the others, Mother Teresa could not be happy at all. But rather she feels of being isolated because of her status. Mother Teresa becomes a medium that helps others to get closer to God.The text states:" By embracing their darkness, she was bringing them to the light-Jesus".She has to abandon her loved ones, family,relationships. She volunteers herself to go to foreign countries, meets strangers and transfers all her Love of Jesus to them.

Betsy said...

Betsy McPherson
English 110
Golden West College
Post #10?

Mother Teresa

The stories about Mother Teresa were actually kind of foreign to me. I did not grow up Catholic, I grew up in a Quaker Christian school so I never really learned anything about more than her name. I actually thought she was an American woman who moved there out of the goodness of her heart, but after realizing that was not the truth about Mother Teresa I learned a lot more about her. The essay we read in our book about her have pieces of letters she had written talking about how lonely and empty she felt and talking about how she is always there for everyone else but no one is really there for her and I really felt like I could relate to that feeling, obviously not on the same level as her or to the same extent but I know what it feels like to give and give and give and never have anyone around you to help when you need help the most. I know this feeling because this is what I tend to do over and over again and I really enjoyed this essay because it was nice to know that what I feel and experience isn’t an isolated situations with myself, but even this woman who was so great and has done so much felt the same way I do at times. It really put her in a human perspective to me instead of the marble like saint on a pedestal where she belonged before.

Kevin said...

Kevin Santamaria
English 110
Golden West College
Post #11

How to Tame a Wild Tongue

I really like how she uses the dentist to intertwine her language deficit. I was actually shocked about how she was told she needs to speak "American" and such. I don’t speak Spanish well, but if anyone told me something like that for speaking any other language, oh man they'd be fired the next day. Sorry the randomness things pinch me. The rest of the passage people I believe were in the right, but the connotation she took from it was negative. Having an accent is not bad, sometimes sexy, but in business it is better if you don’t have one. It is because people stereotype upon first initiative as a foreigners who does not have the same standards. I do not confide in what the college did but I guess I'm defending them because they had the best intentions. She says how people try to take her Chicano dialect away from her, when that is who she has come to be. I do not understand why people do not appreciate different dialect. When I was growing up, my parents would be angered if they thought I had learned some, I guess it was Chicano Spanish. In reality I would learn the proper way of saying Spanish words, they just didn’t know because they had their own dialect from Ecuador. Kind of ironic. I guess they kind of feared me from going through what this girl went through by learning the "wrong" Spanish. Dialect is like an accent, it tells where people are from and who they are. I'm glad she came to fruition and embraced herself, before she lost apart of herself.

JGreenroyd said...

Joshua Greenroyd
GWC
Eng 110
Post #17

How to Tame a Wild Tongue

This story starts off by showing negativity. It shows Anzaldua being yelled at in many different situations. She is being yelled at because of a certain way she is speaking. Whether she is speaking in English, or Spanish, she tends to get in trouble for something she does. This is how the title comes into play. She is being manipulated into controlling, or taming, her tongue. I think the authour used this to show how people get pushed into talking a certain way. Some ways of talking are seen wrong in certain peoples' eyes. Later in the story the view switches. Anzaldua notices that her speech difference is not a bad thing. She does not need to tame it by stopping how she talks. She needs to tame it by continuing to talk in her own tongue. She recognizes it as her heritage. She sees herself as special because she is one of the few people who knows how to use that native tongue. She does not let the way everyone else speaks effect how she wants to speak. Anzaldua is a strong soul.

fastlearner said...

Archie Kaaua
Professor Hsiao
English 110
Golden West College
24 September 2009
Post 16
Fallacies
What are fallacies? Fallacies are arguments that are not sound.
The middle ground fallacy is when a compromise is made in the middle of two numbers; both numbers are assumed to be correct but in reality one of the numbers is not correct.
The gambler’s fallacy is where a pattern has been in place for the long term and the assumption is that the next pattern is due in the short term.
The bandwagon fallacy is when a fact is replaced by misinformation due to peer pressure.
The appeal to authority fallacy is when someone does not have the authority to make a reliable claim.
The straw man fallacy is where someone ignores someone’s actual position and substitutes a distorted, exaggerated version of that position
The red herring fallacy is where someone changes the subject in order to divert attention from the original issue.
The poisoning the well fallacy is where a negative fact about a person is used to discredit that person
The slippery slope fallacy is when an assumed negative event will follow an event that is proposed
The appeal to emotion fallacy is where people’s emotions are used to get them to agree to a claim that is not true.
The personal attack fallacy is where a person substitutes abusive remarks in place of evidence when attacking another person’s claim.

fastlearner said...

Archie Kaaua
Professor Hsiao
English 110
Golden West College
24 September 2009
Post 16
Fallacies
What are fallacies? Fallacies are arguments that are not sound.
The middle ground fallacy is when a compromise is made in the middle of two numbers; both numbers are assumed to be correct but in reality one of the numbers is not correct.
The gambler’s fallacy is where a pattern has been in place for the long term and the assumption is that the next pattern is due in the short term.
The bandwagon fallacy is when a fact is replaced by misinformation due to peer pressure.
The appeal to authority fallacy is when someone does not have the authority to make a reliable claim.
The straw man fallacy is where someone ignores someone’s actual position and substitutes a distorted, exaggerated version of that position
The red herring fallacy is where someone changes the subject in order to divert attention from the original issue.
The poisoning the well fallacy is where a negative fact about a person is used to discredit that person
The slippery slope fallacy is when an assumed negative event will follow an event that is proposed
The appeal to emotion fallacy is where people’s emotions are used to get them to agree to a claim that is not true.
The personal attack fallacy is where a person substitutes abusive remarks in place of evidence when attacking another person’s claim.

Anonymous said...

Monique Gutierrez
English 100
Cerritos College
Post #35

Today

I enjoyed listening to the QHQ's. Michael's QHQ was hilarious. Mr. Hsaio's poetry was beautiful. The third poem from the last one, really touched me. It's how I feel right now. I actually had tears in my eyes. He didn't have to read them, but he did. I used to have a big binder full of poems I'd written. But, one night I got into one of my moods and burned them all. I wanted to erase all the pain I had been feeling by getting rid of my poems. I sure wish I hadn't done that. They were really good. They had some rhymes to them too. I used to flow when I'd read them out loud. It's kind of lame, but cool at the same time. Maybe I should start writing again? Thanks for the idea Mr. Hsaio.

FallenAngel_23 said...

Brian Jimenez
English 100
CC
Post #19

Today was just not a good day. First I did not sleep well at all the day before, for I only had two hours of sleep. From that I had to wake up early to take my father to work. Once I walked outside I just new it was not going to be a good day. Walking outside I noticed that it was very foggy, dark just like how you would see in scary movies like before someone gets killed. It just felt weird in so many ways. After dropping of my pops I stopped for a moment for no apparent reason. Just looked head of me watching this stupid black cat cross the street and glanced at me while it pasted me. Moments later I went on and arrived home. I cannot explain it but it was just one of those days you just feel mad, sad, alone, stressed, and a mix of things. Weird is it not? After, I got ready for school, ironed my clothes and cooked myself some breakfast before taking off. It’s funny but on the way to school I stopped on a street light and not one car or person was around me which gave off this lonely feeling. I got to school, jumped off my parent’s car and went off to class. Math is my first class which was ok, I was happy that a got an A on one of my test’s. I have been falling asleep throughout the day which did not make my day any better. Normally, after class which ends at nine in the morning, I catch myself sleeping under a tree. That’s the way I catch up on sleep. The reason being is I have a three and a half hour break which is from nine till 1230pm is when my Pol 101 class begins. Today I didn’t catch up on any sleep for I had to study for this exam. So sadly I did study. Later I went on and took my test for my POL 101 class which was very hard to focus on. Class ended at 2pm which my next class was at 2pm. I was running late for my speech 130 class. I do not even remember what I learned for I was sleeping on my table. I just hear my classmate say “wake up Brian” and laughing at the same time. Finally I told myself and walked out of class. While walking down stairs I told myself I should maybe get an energy drink before I start English class but at that moment I was also hungry. Reaching for my pockets I remember I left my visa at home. “Great one Brian” I told myself seeing I only had four bucks in cash. So now I needed to know what I really wanted and knowing the fatass I am, I got food. Finally I was at my English class and from this point on I was just beat. Sleepy, moodily, and just done for the day which I couldn’t leave the class yet!!! SO today was just not a good day for me!! I put this little poem I found from this book and was reading its pretty cool because it kind of explained how I felt today.
To every thing there is a season,
And a time to every purpose
under the heaven.

A time to be born, and a time to die;
a time to plant,
and a time to pluck up that which is planted;

A time to kill, and a time to heal;
A time to break down, and a time to build up;

A time to weep, and a time to laugh;
A time to mourn and a time to dance;

A time to embrace,
And a time to refrain from embracing;
A time to get, and a time to sew;
A time to keep, and a time to speak;

A time to love, and a time to hate;
A time of war, and a time of peace.

Thomas Rios said...

Thomas Rios
GWC
English 110
Post # 10???

Mother Teresa

After discussing this piece, I was greatly enlightened. Growing up, Mother Theresa was this god-like figure. I never would have thought that she endured so much pain. It kind of makes sense to me: You spend so much time trying to get people to love god and you have so little time to focus on anything else. She put her own desires and emotions aside to try and get people to connect. She was so selfless in her giving.
She was doing what she loved, but at the same time, it brought her great distress. It must have been quite the burden. Most people have felt lonesome at some point in their life, so it's easy for this essay to reach so many. Very interesting.

dkennedy7 said...

Danielle Kennedy
English 110
GWC
Post #7 (i think)

ok, so, i know i have been falling behind on posts and i know that it is affectinjg my grade, but in this post (especially to mr. hsiao) i will have caught up on posts. i am mainly missing the two most recent stories that we read, so it shouldnt be too bad. anywho onto the stories.
the first story was at his disposal by Mother Teresa. this story was kinda weird for me because i am not a very religious person and alot of the concepts, i understood but i just cant relate to her on the ways where she feels god is almost in a way punishing her. no one asked her to go and help these people but she almost felt she had to help them. at first, it states she is in India and is trying to help those that were caught up in the war. war is awful, but it takes more than a single person to end a war. she then asks for help for her sisters and then lastly, herself. the burden she feels is one equivalent to that of being in hell, which, i dont understand why she just admits that she was in over her head. in class, mr. hsiao pointed out that the higher up on the scale you go, the less and less people there are to help you if it is ever needed, well, i think she got herself so high up the food chain, that only god could help her and to show her that, god let her suffer a bit to show that she cant save everyone.
the second story was how to tame a wild tounge by gloria a. (can never rememeber how to spell her last name. anyway, the story starts out as her being in a dentist office and the doctor (dentist) is being a real jerk and is constantly telling her to keep her tounge in place and not to move it. he goes on and on about how she needs to tame her tounge so that the procedure would go alot smoother. anyway, the story then goes into how at school, her true and first language, spanish, is almost forbidden and not to be spoken. the girl is ridiculed and punished for simple and silly things (ex. talking in spanish with someone of the same culture)she never understood why two languages couldnt co-inside but, she knew that she would never be able to give up where she came from. it goes into detail about how many different languages actually make up her "chicano" language but what was interesting to me was that at a very late age, she heard someone say "nosotras" instead of "nosotros". this is the first time that she had ever heard the feminine version of we. this showed her that it wasnt just a male dominant language and that her culture was actually still thriving and changing. she never abandoned her culture and in the end, was rewarded with the new found knowledge that otherwise would have been forgotten.
well, those are the TWO stories i needed to post on and figured i would save room with using one post instead of two, so, yay!!! good night and will see everyone tomorrow morning

Raufiel M. said...

Raufiel Matias
English 110
GWC
Post #9

"At His Disposal" by Mother Teresa

Mother Teresa represents a person who who prioritizes other people before prioritizing her self. After listening to the discussion in class, I got a better understanding of what the excerpt was about. Mother Teresa would sacrifice her self just to be able to help others and make their lives better. Even though Mother Teresa looks as if she was fine from the outside, she felt emptiness and loneliness on the inside because nobody could really relate to her and her beliefs. She was mentally and spiritually higher than everybody else that's why she felt lonely and nobody could fulfill the emptiness part of her where she mentioned "...to spend myself and yet to be in total darkness."(1) She had lived her life as God intended her to help and pray for the poor.

sfarano said...

Stephanie Farano
English 110
GWC
post # 12ish

At His Disposal

Mother Teresa devoted her life to the hopeless, while working to spread the faith of god throughout the world. Single handedly, she believed that her efforts could make an impact. This was a bold and selfless attempt, considering she traveled to some of the most troubled areas in the world. Through patterns of prayer and sacrifice Mother Teresa's unfortunate personal struggle became apparent. In her dominate role as a women of great faith, the community looked to her for strength. Mother Teresa asked for all of the people in need to redirect their negative circumstances towards her, and in return she would absorb their burden. As a person who does not have the immortal power of God there is no way, to truly handle this responsibility. The pressure to constantly put yourself behind all others, is a difficult task. The strain of her responsibilities begin to take form, and throughout the middle of the writing her voice changed. The strong and honorable woman of God begins to show weakness in the form self reflection. As Mother Teresa later talks about her inner struggles with life, you can see that she is not necessarily happy in her personal life. Her public role as a women of leadership doesn't allow her to connect with people on a personal level, and in return she is lonely. This is the moment in which maybe she wishes that she did not take on such a large role. It was her ambitious self that felt she could change the world, and now she is realizing that it is a lonely place being at the top.

After our discussion in class and the dissecting of her words, I was left with a new perception of her public persona. The strong and selfless individual that you hear so many amazing stores about is just human like the rest of us. This is a problem with our society we put people on pedestals and tend to forget that we are all just human.

ET said...

Eric Torres
English 110
Golden West College
Post #8

How to Tame a Wild Tongue by Gloria Anzaldua

Anzaldua writes about her struggles in being a minority in America. Ever since she was a little girl, she has been taught that she cannot speak freely because of her race and ethnicity. She recalls a time where she was punished for speaking her name because the teacher told her not to speak in spanish. Right then, at that age, she knew she was being treated differently than everyone else. She had also began to realize that not only had she been discriminated by her race and ethnicity but also because of her sex. Even in the Spanish language women were being treated differently. She called it Chicano Spanish. She used the word nosotros as an example. Nosotros was a word that would be used if it was including men or women. However the word nosotros has a masceline connotation to it. Therefore it is just implied that women could be included. In the first part of her writing, she describes her sitting in a chair in the dentist's office. The dentist tells her that her tongue is getting in the way pushing out the wads of cotton. Her tongue represents her freedom of speech and expression. The wads of cotton represent the people discriminating against her. As she tries to speak out, whether it is voicing her opinion or just speaking in spanish, she is constantly being told that she cannot freely express herself. A wild tongue just cannot be tamed.

Samantha said...

Samantha Sullivan
English 110
GWC
Post#7??

How To Tame A Wild Tongue

I feel a relation to this story after reading it through really slowly so that I could not be distracted by the spanish writting. You may not believe it but I am half Mexican. (I am pretty sure the other half of me is pretty easy to see, "white") My grandma of my mom's side was born and raised in southern Texas where she and her family spoke spanish as a first language and english as their second. My mom's father was too, born in the united States, but only by chance. His parents moved to whereever there was work and it just so happened that they were in Wyoming, but they did not speak a word of english either. My grandparent upbringings were incased in the Mexican culture and they were extremly traditional.

So now to bring it a little bit to the future. My mom, both parents speaking spanish, grew up with a house hold of a Mexican American speaking household. She spoke spanish that she was taught from home, but was also able to speak english very well. It was never a question for her that english was her first fully comprehensive language. She , as well as my four other aunts, did not pass their second language onto their children. They "lost" their origional language of spanish. They have forgotten much of what they knew and can only speak it well enought just to get them by.

As for my cousins and I, we are probably the ones who let my grandma down the most. I am probaly the one in the third generation that can undersatnd and speak the most spanish. That is even embarassing to say. I am horrible!! I will always remember my grandma sitting in her room watching her novelas and calling me in to watch them with her. she would try to translate them to me the best she could and hope that i would catch on. I never really did. She then would scold and be saddened by the fact that my mom and my aunts never forced us to learn spanish. To this day my grandma still tries to instill the language that she origionaly brought to our family.

I hope to some day make her proud and have an educational conversation with her in spanish. I believe she will really enjoy that. For now though I feel that in her eyes I am just a white-washed Mexican.

Jessica Atthowe said...

Jessica Atthowe
English 110
GWC
Post?

How to Tame a Wild Tongue

It's amazing to me that people will turn away from their culture to fit in. It also amazes me that people are treated differently or looked down upon because they are true to their culture and live it. In this story the girl loses her true self because she is forced to stop speaking her native language and learn how to speak English with no accent. She could not stand up for herself or rebel against her teachers. Under the pressure of other people or groups people change themselves and sometimes for the better but in most cases for the worse. She has drive and wants to be her own person and speak the language she knows well.

Andy4Candy said...

(Andy) Nam Pham
English 110
GWC
Post #10

"At His Disposal" by Mother Teresa

Mother Teresa expresses her distress in this story where she is in India. Her loneliness compels her to parallel her life to living in Hell. This is because shes been put on a pedestal, higher then all the beings below. It is lonely for her to be so high up, with no one for guidance but God. She compares herself with Jesus, but even Jesus had spoken to God. With Mother Teresa, she is just a mortal, she cannot speak to God, only confide in the ideals of the Bible.
This reminded me of the book "Of Mice and Men." The character "Slim," the tough, overseer of the farm, was so well respected and feared, that he was alienated from the rest of the workers, and had no one to connect to. Simply because he was placed "above" the rest of the workers in the work chain, he had no one to relate or connect to. The same story happens for Mother Teresa, she is placed so high up that she has no one to connect to. That's why she is compared to Jesus, she's been idolized and can only relate to idolized figures, of great deeds specifically.
One would ask "why is she even there in the first place?" A point was brought up in class just the other day, that she had a sense of ambition, confidence, cockiness. She believed herself to be strong enough to clean up the war filled land. It was thought that Mother Teresa had her own selfish goals and motives. Although you must be strong and confident enough to take on such a task, I do not believe it was due to her own self motives. I believe she was a selfless person, who actually performed deeds for the greater good. In the "Dark Knight," Batman was antagonized by Gotham City to prevent the Joker from proving his point, that men are selfish, corruptible animals. He did not do this for himself, he did it for the greater good, the city. Nor would he have benefited at all from his "villainous" act of killing Two Face. Mother Teresa's story reminded me of Batman, where she put all the weight on her shoulders so that mankind could have a better fate. She was a kind hearted woman, idolized and tortured at the same time.

Stephanie Wold said...

Stephanie Wold
English 110
GWC
Post #8?

In the story How to Tame a Wild Tongue, the author is explaining how she is repremanded in America for speaking her native language. She not only is repremanded by white people that expect her to speak english perfectly only because she wants to be an American, but also from other people that come from Mexico and speak some other form of Spanish. She lists multiple forms of the language such as Chicano and Tex Mex. The actions and words used against her hurt her emotionally and she seems angry. I can't personally connect with this story because I have never been told not to live by my own regards. I speak perfect english and that is the only language I know and understand. If I was to enter another country and they were constantly upset with me for not learning their language, I would not know what to do with myself. I would be distraught and angry that they expected me to live by their standards and not how I was raised in my own culture. I can only imagine how this girl feels.

Erica said...

Erica Lloyd
English 110
GWC
Post #10

How to Tame a Wild Tongue

Although I have never personally experienced the language trials that Gloria Anzaldua has, I agree with the point that she makes: "attacks on one's form of expression with the intent to censor are a violation of the First Amendment". I have not personally felt Anzaldua's struggle, but I have seen countless others struggle with language barriers and be discriminated against for it. At my work, there is not anyone there who speaks Spanish. Every now and then, customers will come in and ask "Habla Espanol?" After they are turned away, my coworkers will often say things like "You live in America, learn to speak English". I've reminded them before that America doesn't actually have an official language, but they always remind me that the majority of America speaks English, the government is in English, so they should learn English. It is sad, but it is something that I hear quite frequently from all around me.

I really enjoyed Anzaldua's particular writing style of blending English and Spanish in her essay. It really drove home her points about so called "Spanglish". I especially enjoyed reading all of the Spanish sayings, because most of the time they just can't be translated into English and mean the same thing. Part of the meaning gets lost in translation, so to speak. It makes me wish I understood Spanish so that I could grasp the full effect of what the sayings mean.

Her final paragraphs are inspiring. Anzaldua has a way with words and uses appeal to emotions quite effectively. Reading the final paragraphs I feel fired up and ready to help the cause.

Cianna said...

Cianna Calandrino
English 110
21 September 2009


QHQ
Question: What food could define me?
Hypothesis: Home made lasagna.
Question: Why does Lasagna define me?
Home made lasagna is hot, meaty goodness that has been in our family and blood for generations. The process takes days to make with two hands and lots of love. Growing up in a huge Italian family has always been an adventure. There was always an open door policy and enough food to feed an army so you never knew who would be coming over. You can always expect that everyone would be over. When you came over whether you were hungry or not, you were fed. One of many family recopies passed down from generation to generation is the lasagna from scratch. Special ingredients are included that you only get to learn after you have been cooking with the family. If you were married in forget about learning till you have been there at least 10 years and get approval from Nana. For me the coveted recipe is special just like the traditions in our family where family comes first no matter what. Memories of 40 people sitting around a 4 person table in a dinning room the size of a bathroom. Then for lunch we had they would slap meats, cheeses, and tons of sourdough bread all over the table. No plates, utensils, or personal space was found on the premises. It feels warm like the lasagna melting in my mouth. It has no exclusive groups like some families can do. We are meshed together like the ingredient squished and cooked together. Once put together to make the lasagna one can not separate them. Once you taste the fresh cheese, meat, garlic, etc, it has strange influence on you. That same influence is just like the one my family has given me. I am who I am because of my loud, obnoxious, extremely large, stereotypical Italian family.

ET said...

Eric Torres
English 110
Golden West College
Post #9

I Have a Dream by Martin Luther King Jr.

I have read this speech many times throught out my classes in high school and college. It seems like every time I read it, I always get goosebumps from paragraph 15 to the end of his speech. King's word are so powerful and uplifting that I can hear his voice in my head shouting out the words and pronouncing them as if I was standing on those very steps where he spoke. After being introduced to The Allegory of the Cave by plato, and reading King's I Have a Dream speech, I can see a relation between the two in that when King talks of justice he brings out the image of sunlight and mountaintops. He uses words like, "we must rise" and "the sunlit path" to paint a picture of hope and happiness once his dream becomes reality. He says, "Now is the time to rise from the dark and desolate valley of segregation to the sunlit path of racial justice" (6). By saying this, King shows his cave of segregation and discrimination and tells us his goal of rising to the "sunlit path of racial justice" (his mountaintop). In King feels that it is his obligation to speak for all of his people (black and white) to create that brotherhood relationship amongst all. His words and his dream of reaching justice is based on faith.

fastlearner said...

Archie Kaaua
Professor Hsiao
English 110
Golden West College
29 September 2009
Post17
Writing a paper in this format has been a lot of work but I am glad that we are learning how to write effectively. This beautiful format has proved invaluable in my other classes when we are asked to write an essay. I have a plan before I write. This is so key in not getting writer’s block. I feel like a huge weight has been lifted off of me and most if not all of my future papers will be accepted and well received (I am getting A’s and you can too). I used to wonder if I was doing it right and was often looking for help to be sure. Most of the time I was doing a lot of things wrong. This class scared me when I read the phone book white pages style pet peeves. I wanted out and was looking for an easier class (all of which were full). I am so glad that I stayed. Everything in this class was geared toward writing and now with this paper I was armed! It seems like a lot of back and forth work but with the guidelines and group work I can see improvements every day. I hope for more classes like this one that make other classes easier in the future. I like to practice on the blog if I can think of it. It can only help me in the future. I hope everyone is sharing this very cool experience.

fastlearner said...

Archie Kaaua
Professor Hsiao
English 110
Golden West College
29 September 2009
Post18
I was listening to President Obama’s speech on racism in America and it was interesting to hear all of his experiences coming form a half white and half black family. His mother who was white was at a time afraid of black men and would shout racial remarks at them. His family is made up of many different races and he has grown up in the poorest of nations and also gone to the most expensive of schools here in the United States. He does not like racism as it is still practiced in some places today. I like what he said, “This nation cannot afford to let racism continue”. This speaks volumes about how far this nation has come from where it was when slavery was legal. He said that his wife was black and that she had both slave owners and slaves on her side of his family. I chose this speech because it reflects Martin Luther King’s famous speech “I have a dream”. MLK spoke about a day when a man would be judged by the content of his character and not the color of his skin. President Obama is his dream. Our nation is truly a melting pot and soon most people will accept other races with tolerance.

sfarano said...

Stephanie Farano
GWC
English 110
Post #13

Professor Hsiao's workshops are AWESOME!!! This is my first college course that I have had peer editing, and I love it!! Essays can be overwhelming and at times a struggle but with input from another person, I've been able to overcome my writing insecurities. It is always difficult to open up and share work because it is very personal. The workshops build trust and break down walls. It is important to not only be able to learn strong paragraph structure, but to encourage proof reading. The positive criticism and new view point contributes tremendously to the writing. Overall I can say that the workshops have been a great way for me to progress in my writing.

...and thanks to Leydi and her amazing drafting I feel more confident with my work.

Anonymous said...

Dalene Kolb
English 110
Golden West College
Post #28

Well random thought...well kind of random. I just bought Nicholas Sparks new book "The Last Song". It is amazing. I'm already half way through, and thought I would let everyone know its a great book. So if you want a great read check it out. You wont be disapointed. Hope everyone enjoys their weekend.

~Dalene

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Stephanie Wold said...

Stephanie Wold
English 110
GWC
Post 9

Just thought I'd share that I just finished my tattoo after starting it in May! I'm super excited & loe it. :] Have a good night everyone.

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Anonymous said...

Monique Gutierrez
English 100
Cerritos College
Post #36

Grey's Anatomy

I know it's just a show, but I am watching the season premiere and tears are flowing. It is very emotional and deserves lots of awards. The writers are very talented. I haven't been watching the show for a couple seasons now, but I caught the finale and I couldn't wait for it to come back on. It sucks when they kill off a major character. I was completely shocked when O'Malley died. It's weird how a television show can bring out your emotions. I guess that's how good the show really is. I wonder what classes you have to take to write for television shows?

Arcie said...

Arcelia Swarr
English 100
CC
Post #18ish

Today has been one of the longest and most draining days i have had in a long time!! Let me give a quick background first, then I will explain my day!! Yesterday, while I was in English, apparently my "angelic" 2 1/2 year old daughter(Kaylee) whacked her 7 year old brother(Austin) in the head with a hard toy. Kaylee has a really bad habit of hitting when she's mad, a habit I've tried so hard to break her of. Ok, now back to today. Austin woke up and was taking his time getting ready, as usual, then he started complaining about a headache. I gave him some children's ibuprofen and took him to school. He seemed fine to me at that time! Well, the school called me while I was at Walmart with my step mom buying some supplies for our cancer walk tomorrow and told me Austin was in the nurse's office and he just wasn't himself. Everyone at the school seems to know my son, and they all know he's just a bundle of unbound energy, and the lady from the school said he's not normally like that. Since I was busy and couldn't leave just at that moment I decided to call my cousin, who lives a block from the school. I called the school back to let them know who would be picking up Austin, and they said he was asleep. After I finished all my shopping, I called my cousin back to see how Austin was doing. She said he was sleeping again, and that he seemed a little dizzy and out of it on the walk home. I started to worry that he might have a concussion from Kaylee hitting him, so I made a doctor's appointment. The lady who scheduled the appointment for me told me not to worry too much about his head because he wasn't throwing up or sleeping without wanting to wake up, so I tried not to worry. Being a single mom, I have had to toughen up on a lot of things, things like shots, puke, emergency room trips, things like that. Well, I went to pick up my 4 year old from school first so Austin would not have to be in the car more than was necessary, and then we went to my aunt's to get Austin. When I got there, he was sort of crying, sort of whimpering about his headache, then he said he had to throw up. Immediately I helped him rush off to the bathroom, just in time. I told him to sit tight for a second, and I had to step out. The only thing I could think was "as long as he's not throwing up, there's no need to worry, so much for that, now what???" and I started to break down and cry. My uncle calmed me a little, and I went right back to my poor Austin and helped him back to the couch. I was so worried, and I didn't know what to do! When my aunt got there, she said he was probably just coming down with something, which helped me relax a little more. After that, Austin threw up 3 more times, the last time not even close to the bathroom. My cousin helped me clean it up real quick and then it was time to take Austin to the doctor. When we got there, Austin was finally feeling a little better, but I was still worried. After the doctor checked him out though, I felt a little more at ease. He said Austin just had a stomach virus and that it just had to run it's course, which could take 2-3 days, and too keep Austin on a bland diet. I was relieved when Austin finally said he was hungry. I thought he was getting better, but it was only temporary! Now he's got a fever again, but he's finally sleeping and not throwing up! I just do for him like I do for my daughter when she's sick, switch off between Tylenol and Motrin every 3 hours to fight the fever and body ache. I hope this doesn't last too long!

Brittany Williams said...

Brittany Williams
English 110 
GWC
Post 19

Hey guys!
Can you please let me know what the hw was for Thursday's 8am class? 

Dalene- Thanks for the tip on the Nicholas Sparks book. Being the typical girl that I am, I absolutely love his books!

See you all on Tuesday!

I Threw It! said...

Brandon hebert
Goldenwest
Eng110



Brittany:

hw:

write intro/conclusion paragraphs for HOmonyms/AOTC paper

write reflection(in the blog) about the writing process as it portains to the homonyms/aotc paper

there was also extra credit:
bring a modest/conservative dress as a donation if you opine. charity is for impoverished women/mothers in africa

I Threw It! said...

Brandon Hebert
Goldenwest
Eng110

almost forgot. Blog about MLK or Obama speech located in the book

abstractxbeauty said...

Samantha Navarro
English 103
Cerritos College
Post # bla bla

Writing Process:

This has been an interesting essay for me to write. I never actually put together these thoughts in my head. I am writing about how I have been trying to escape the stereotype of traditional Mexican. My family expects me to live by certain values, and would rather have me conform to their point of view. I have definetely done things differently. I did not realize that over the years this process has really shaped my view on the world around me. My struggle is still in the process concerning my parents truly accepting my decisions, if it ever gets to that at all. As I was writing this essay, I asked my mom if she still thought my choices were wrong, and she said yes. I did not realize that they still believe I have not done the right things. She said she doesn't understand why I did what I did. In case you're wondering, at 16 I decided to part from the Catholic religion, and at 23 I got pregnant by a high school friend, and we decided not to get together, my parents wanted me to marry him because of the pregnancy. I just hope Mr. H doesn't tell me "this is absolutely NOT what I asked for!" lol.

Yue said...

Yue Hayes
English 110
Golden West College
Post #15

Arcelia
Oh my gosh your story scared me until I read He said Austin just had a stomach virus. I always assume the worst in those situations...

I have a little 4 year old brother who acts like I'm his mom. Whenever he's excited to talk to me about something, he always calls me "mom" by accident. A couple days ago, he started to cough a lot... He started telling me that he needed medicine, which he did, because it just got worse the next day. He hung out with me until he fell asleep on my bed. That's how we spend time. He's falling asleep right next to me as I'm typing this.

So... I sort of understand the things you're going through. I would feel drained, too, if I had to worry so much in one day!

I hope Austin feels better! It sounds to me like you're a very caring mommy. Your kids are very lucky to have you. And I have tremendous amount of respect for you for being a full time student on top of that.

Archie
Just a little shout out... I really liked your QHQ. I didn't know that anyone could write a whole paragraph on carrots!

Eric
Thanks for the heads up about the #90. Being the curious and gullible person that I am, I probably would've done it. Haha.

Brandon
I like your display picture. :P

cutebutcrazyj said...

English 110
GWC
Post #10?
Writing Process
This whole process has been a stressful process for me. Sorry Prof. Hsiao :) I did not know what in the world my cave was and I could not remember any incident in which I was stereotyped, so, it took me the longest time to figure out whether I was going to do AOTC or Homonyms. I eventually decided on AOTC because it seemed easier for me to find out what my cave was instead of trying to rack my brain on whether or not I have been stereotyped in any way all my life. Once I had that down, we were already into needing our first body Paragraph. The challenge was to figure out what was holding me back in my life. I have never been one to look deep inside myself to figure out what was blocking me from truly succeeding within myself and in my life. So, I just made up some random cave so I had something to show in class. After that, I figured this first cave was not deep enough for me. So, I ended up changing my cave at least three times before I finally figured out the source of my darkness. Now, it is a little less stressful,but I am still worried about this paper because I do not like elaborating on how I am hindering myself from a lot of experiences, but I guess everyone needs to see the light sometime in their lives.

John Hsiao said...

Prof. Hsiao
English 100/ 103/ 110
CC/ GWC
Post idk

Samantha Shepherd wrote:

Samantha Shepherd
English 103
Cerritos College

So, I am officially sick. Yay! I think I have a cold. I am in the computer lab right now falling asleep, and trying to stay alert....I feel as if I am in a bubble.. =(

Anyways, reading Obama's speech gave me a little comfort and hope that I think that some of America has lost due to the economic/health issues. I really enjoyed his speech and I have always thought that Obama is a phenomenal speaker. "Yes we can!" is such a profound motto, it reminds me of the story of the "Little Engine That Could" and I think expresses the attitudes that many Americans possess today. I have to give it to him, whether he really did appreciate McCain, or whether it was just a face in commending McCain for all the hard work he had done not only as his opponent, but as a person, was very admirable. I believe that he is someone that can truly see eye to eye with not only the "elite" (haha), but the common folk as well which is something that every leader should possess. Kudos to Obama's speech.

September 23, 2009 12:27 PM

***

I know everyone is working on their papers

or

at least you should be!



Great posts thus far. . .

Brittany Williams said...

Brittany Williams
English 110
GWC
Post #20

Brandon - Thank you so much! You are awesome!

The King in Yellow said...

Jon Croft
English 110
Golden West College
Post #15

President Barack Obama Acceptance Speech

In short: Yes we can.

That is the true essence of what he is saying. I remember watching that speech and actually feeling optimistic (SHOCK) about a little of the road ahead. Someone who could finally put a voice to the notion that anything still is in fact possible. Nowadays, the possibilities for chaos are no longer the only things that boggle the mind: change is neck and neck with it.


Probabilities may not be endless, but possibilities are. One single person can do absolutely anything with their life. If I wanted to do 400 back flips in ten seconds, could I? Sure, why the hell not. It isn't very probable, but with a bit of imagination, anything is possible. So to those of you with these awesome imaginations but no conventional outputs, keep those ideas handy. To those of you who are somewhat lacking in the imagination machine, keep at it, you'll get something eventually. It is indeed worth the effort.

Brittany Williams said...

Brittany Williams
English 110
GWC
Post #21

The Writing Process

I enjoy writing. Telling stories through the use of words has always been somewhat theraputic for me. It is, however, in structured writing that I often struggle. I find that trying to fit in a map sentence or a thesis statement is often difficult. I prefer to write without thinking about such incoveniences. It is for this reason that I found the group process to be helpful. Their help in the structure of my writing has been incredibly useful. Overall, I have greatly enjoyed this process. I feel as though it has helped me to become a better writer (at least, I hope it has!).

Aside from it being helpful, this process has also given me a chance to get to know my fellow classmates. This, unfortunately, is not something that happens often in other classes. Expressing our vulnerability (i.e. our caves, etc) through written word has paved a way for trust to take hold in each group. I must confess, however, that revealing such weakness has been tough, for it is this element of my life that I often work so hard to conceal. In revealing such things, however, I have learned that it is often in this uneasy disclosure that relief is found, and through this writing process, I have been able to find just that.

Brittany Williams said...

Brittany Williams
English 110
GWC
Post #22

I just have to say that I am excited to see Fame!

That is all.

a.murphy said...

Andy Murphy
Eng 103
CC
Post #12


"Writing is an adventure. To begin with, it is a toy and an amusement. Then it becomes a mistress, then it becomes a master, then it becomes a tyrant. The last phase is that just as you are about to be reconciled to your servitude, you kill the monster and fling him to the public."
-Winston Churchill-


.My Writing Process.
It starts in class when the assignment is first assigned. My mouth slightly opens, while my expression is wiped clean off my face. Now what goes on in my head is another story. To put it in perspective it's like LAX on the worst day of traveling of the year and in the meantime your flight is delayed for hours on end. In otherwords, my inner self that helps create the essays I write, is contemplating whether or not not to short circuit and have me go into a frenzy of manic depressed lamenting.

But I come to the place where i've been so many times before. The road is so familar now. I've been doing this years on end throughout my time of education. It's just me and the monster face to face. I never let the beast take me, but it's always I who prevails.

My next step when tackling any essay or project is to connect with it. I must be able to put myself into what i'm doing. If I can't, I know whatever it is I'm doing won't have a heartbeat to it or any fire. As in Homonyms, I believe it's easy for all of us to connect. We live in a world of classification. Everyday we can see ourselves being steered into another category to generealize who we are. It's in our societies and cultures' nature to put us in groups. This can be what Churchill referred to as the "mistress" part. We become involved and seduced into our writing and spill everything that needs being said out onto black and white.

Now comes for the time to roll up our sleeves and get down the business. The "master" part comes. When we have to write out the minimum to maximum required by the guideline given to us prior before attacking any behemoth. I usually find myself pounding my head against the dormit computer desk or slapping my forehead to see if that will spark a drop of inspiration to help me muster a page long paragraph. It never does, but it's part of the ritual in the fight. After rereading Homonyms again and again things start to click in my head. Words and sentences become one and pour out through my fingers and flow across the screen in front of me. It's the hardest part, but we have all dont it some many times. It can be just one spark, however when it ignites it can set ablaze something so big that it cannot be stopped until the very end.

When you make any beast mad or think it's all over, think again. The "Tyrant" comes out now or in other words *gulp* the editing process. This can be the most troubling part of the process to me. Again reading all of what I wrote. Picking out small words and adding punctuation. This can be the final blow to the essay to finally kill it, but do I have enough strength to do it? Theres so much I need to do; other classes homework, go out with my friends, watch some college football, go surfing, as the list goes on and on. But, I know if I finish it here it will be all over and the finished product will be something that amazes you. Can you believe you actually put so much time into something like that? Of course. We've done it so many times before that the path to achieve it should be trodden with our footsteps from previous times.

-Everyone has trouble writing anything big or small. No great writer ever started great, but had to do great and arduous things to get to where they are now. No matter if you think you suck at English or are the next Shakespeare, you all have times of insanity when writing. My advice is to keep a bottle of ibuprofen near.

a.murphy said...

A. Murphy
Eng 103
CC
Post #13



H1N1 Flu

To all who may have contracted this influenza or think they are coming down with it, I'd like to share a story with you.

I love to travel. Especially places that noone has heard of. So this past summer my trip was to go to Turks & Caicos Islands, a chain of 40 islands only 8 being inhabited, for a little over 2 weeks. I was looking for something remote, tropical, and somewhat represting the Corona commericials (you know just two people on miles of white,powerdy beaches), But, my surname being Murphy it wasn't bound to happen.

6 days before I was destined to leave I started feeling sick. Over the next couple days a fever kicked in that leveled out at 104 degrees even while taking ibuprofen 800's to try and subside it. By the third day, my appetite was entirely gone and left me with no energy. I had to be rushed to the emergency room and had the works done.

Now I have a grand fear of needles and my motto is "if you want my blood, you damn well better earn it". So when mister murse tries dagging the hyperdermic needle into my skin I turn pale and heave whatever fluids were left in my weak body onto his pink scrubs. The doctor was nowhere in sight, because she knew what I had. The only thing the doctor did was put fear in me by saying that two people my age came through the hospital last month with Swine and died from it. Wow, I feel optimistic. So blood work comes back saying I have swine and they can't give me a shot because the (enter explicit "f" word) CDC is not allowing any shots until October. So I get stuck with some Tamiflu which helps it, but not in time. The CDC restricts me from flying for 5-7 days so I don't spread it elsewhere. My summer vacation, which is the only thing I save up for, had to be canceled because of swine flu.

So for anyone who might or does have it, please use me as a comedic relief to your temporary sickness!

=]

CaLL ME P :D said...

Priscilla Daza
english 100
cerritos college
post #13

writing process

Man, who knew that the first essay would take me back all the way to first grade! This entire essay on homonyms and labels has been a massive flashback for me. In my essay I mention events that took place first grade, sixth grade and ninth grade. Events that I still recall in specific detail on how every single thing took place. Who knew? Now these events that I thought I had forgotten are now benefiting for my essay. I never knew that those events will be brought up at this time in my life for an essay. I knew that my label has affected me throughout my life. Now with this essay I realized that throughout my life the label that people would describe me as has impacted my life greatly. It has some how made me become the greater person. Although, it was difficult dealing with it at the ages that i did, in some way I suppose I am grateful for that. I believe that I am an understanding, courageous, outgoing person. I would be a completely different person if I have not encountered that labeling at school. I know this for certain.

Macey said...

Macey Lindsay-Clinton
English 110
Golden West College
Post #10

Essay Reflection

The experience of having to not only discover a cave of you life but then to analyze how you were able to come to an enlightenment was truly exuberating. I have never had to write such a personal essay for school, and thus is was a breath of fresh air. For me, the hardest part was to be able to open up and add details. I am very used to writing very condensed and to the point paragraphs while this assignment called for longer and more detailed ones. As well, writing a two page paragraph has never been so easy! I liked that we only needed one quote and most of the paragraphs were simply our thoughts and ideas instead of a deep analysis of a quote. I really liked being able to hear other people open up to their caves and their stereotypes which can be really hard to do.

Stephanie Wold said...

Stephanie Wold
English 110
GWC
Post #10

Writing my essay on a stereotype that I have been given has not been entirely simple. I've had difficulty because I misunderstood what was expected of the essay and my essay is completely wrong, to say the least. I have had to start fresh, after already having the bulk of my paper completeled. It's a little disheartening because I got great feedback from people reading my essay and capitalized a lot on it, but oh well. I'm hoping to have it completed by Tuesday so that I can ask someone to read it for me. (Hopefully Dalene, I really like your feedback :]) I enjoy the time we spend in class helping the other students prepare their essays and I like getting the feedback also because it helps me notice things that could be done differently. I'm sure my next experience will be better because I plan on being full informed of what is expected before I start my essay.

I Threw It! said...

Brandon Hebert
Goldenwest
Eng110
Post: 21

YUE,
dude where you been? haha i was suprised but relieved to see u made it to class. pardon the 'u'

BRITTANY,
ha, ya thanks I have a few kanye parodys. No problem, whats funny is that was the one day I actually meticulously wrote down the homework and put it in my pocket. You said something in your last post:

"In revealing such things, however, I have learned that it is often in this uneasy disclosure that relief is found."

I agree. If we open the wounds and share them then soon they start to heal. Reminds me of a quote from JC: "there is no greater love than that one shed his blood for his friend."

A.MURPHY,

man, I would be so upset. Wasting all that money and having nothing to show for it. Of course one could always be grateful for life, but man. I say you start a Murphy Charity, for people who get screwed out of vacations.

----------------------------------
Remember today. It is good. A year from now we'll all look back with nostalgia and remeniscence.

x7michael7x said...

Michael Swisher
English 100
Cerritos College
Post#21

My Writing Process

Writing an essay is in no way similar to writing most other forms of literature. When one writes poetry, or short stories, there is more passion than sense, and more fiction than fact. An essay is a formal illustration of a point, or points. When I write poetry, or more emotional pieces (even though this particular essay we are currently writing is more emotional for me than most of my writings) so they flow easier for me. I am able to rhyme my words easily, and I am able to use symbolism and metaphor in a smoother fashion than I am able to write factual, straight forward literature. When I write essays my first step is to outline (usually within my mind) how the entire piece will unfold prior to writing a single word. I see the body paragraphs within the context of the instruction, and then devise the scheme I will use in order to convey my thesis. Once I have the simple structure of my essay in mind, depending on the form of essay I am writing, I will a few short sentences of EACH body paragraph (separated of course) so I can maintain the balance of the essay. A key component to the writing process is focus. Everyone knows that you can say too little within the confines of the body paragraphs, but most don’t know that you can actually say too much. Hording ideas, and feeling into a single portion of the paper is a terrible idea. There should be flow, as well as balance of attention to the paper. I ensure that the thesis of the paper is proper stated within each paragraph, so any reader can read any portion of the paper, yet still have a vague understanding of the intent. The entire purpose of an essay is to convey understanding, and for the reader to feel the feeling (if it happens to be an emotional piece). Once I have the basic outline of my body paragraphs on paper, I elaborate each and every idea, or fact in order. Once I have on paper the content which I want to convey to the reader, I read the essay several times. If I find it has any “holes” or lacks symmetry or continuity, I may (and have on several occasions) discard and start over. A writer should be able to place on paper the idea of his essay (thesis) in a simple manner, in multiple ways, throughout the piece. After I am satisfied with the body paragraphs, I write an introduction (which you will find are all of the same format, and follow the same procedures) that grabs attention. An introduction is EXTREMELY important. If a reader is bored within the first few sentences, he will not read on…. Trust me. Using quotation, or re-worded poetic illustration in the introduction helps tremendously. The introduction was laid out for us by Mr. Hsaio pretty clearly, so there shouldn’t be a question of HOW to write it, just a question of which words to use. I take my time with the introduction, because as the old adage goes “you get no second chance to make a first impression”. The conclusion, in all honesty, should write itself. Mr. Hsaio gave us an outline for this also, so really the only decisions left to make, are how to structure the individual sentences so that is plainly, and profoundly sums the total of the essay. The closing line is the REAL conclusion, so ensure the final words read by the reader are capturing, and thick. If the reader is disappointed by the last few words of a well-written essay, it tends to affect the overall sense, and approval of the piece. I hope this helped someone. Please feel free to email me if there are any questions concerning the essay we are currently wrapping up. Have a great rest of the weekend people.

Poppies of Pundit

Princes profound
Paupers propose
Pillars pretend
Poets prose
Prisons peer
Primal pretense
Pictures penned
Perfect profess

~*~*eSmE*~*~ said...

INEsmeralda Orozco
English 100
CC
post #34

SANDRA


ALL IM TRYING TO SAY IS THAT PEOPLE CHANGE. ME PERSONALLY DO NOT THINK SHE IS A SELLOUT. MUSIC HAS EVOLVED AND I AGREE WITH JENNY SHE IS ATTRACTING MUTURE PEOPLE. JUST BECAUSE SHE TALKS ABOUT HIPS DOES NOT MEAN SHE IS A SELLOUT SHE GROW UP ALONG WITH HER MUSIC SHE IS HELPING PEOPLE IN AFRICA I BELIEVE (NOT SURE WHAT COUNTRY) BUT SHE IS HELPING POOR CHILDREN I THINK THAT IS MORE IMPORTANT THEN TRYING TO FIGURE OUT IF SHE IS A SELLOUT OR NOT
I KNOW NO MATTER WHAT YOU WILL STILL THINK SHE A SELLOUT AND I RESPECT THAT BUT I DONT THINK SHE IS AT THE TIME


IM GLAD WE ARE KOO BOUT THIS :'}

~*~*eSmE*~*~ said...

Esmeralda Orozco
english100
cc
post#36

ABOUT MY PAPER OMG!!!!!!!
BENG THE FIRST AND STUFF IM HAVING SOOOOO MUCH STRESS!!!!! STRESS STRESS STRESS WHEN HE TOLD US ABOUT THE THESIS THEY READ MINE OUT LOUD AND HE JUST LOOKED DOWN AT HOW BAD IT WAS THATS WHEN I WAS LIKE OMG WHAT AM I GOING TO DO I HAVE TO THINK OF ONE ASAP I WAS GLAD TO HEAR IT WOULD BE DUE WED THO CUZ I KNOW I CAN DO ONE MORE DAY I KNOE CELINA HAS BEEN GOING TO SLEEP AT 3AM AND I FEEL SO BAD FOR HER BUT I BET A LOT OF OTHER PEOPLE ARE DOING THE SAME THING ESPECIALLY IF THIS IS THE FIST TIME WITH MR.H I KNOW IM SCARED TO TURN IN MY PAPER I HAVE A FEELING IM GOING TO SHAKE WHILE IM HANDNG IT TO HIM OMG I REALLY DID LIKE WRITING IT THOUGH BECAUSE IT WAS IN A WAY ABOUT MY LIFE AND WHO KNOWS ME BETTER THEN MYSELF I THIK IF IT WAS ABOUT GLOBAL WARMING OR ABORTION OI WOULD HAVE BEEN WAY MORE NERVOUS AND STRESSED OUT WELL I WISH YOU ALL LUCK AND I HOPE YOU SEND LUCK THIS WAS

Stephanie Wold said...

Stephanie Wold
English 110
GWC
Post #11

I've never completely read MLK's speech which kind of surprises me. It's always been expressed as such an important piece of history, but yet I've never been asked by a history teacher to read his speech in it's entirety. His speech is so moving and inspirational because at that moment, blacks were not close to becoming equal to whites. MLK was quite brave for speaking out like he did and he did so with such integrity and motivation. I love the part of his speech where he says "We can never be satisfied as long as the Negro is the victim of the unspeakable horrors of police brutality...". This is a quote that I think expresses how I feel. I don't ever think or want to be "satisfied" with what I have. I always want to have the fire in me to strive for something more for myself. I want to always improve my life and look for deeper meaning, which I believe he was wanting the people around him to do. Everything he says in his speech is inspirational and makes me believe in the good in the world.

Skagway said...

Zachary Duke
Eng 103
CC
Post#???

Writing Proses

This essay is with a drought one of the most interesting ones i EVER had to write. Mr. H has an interesting idea for each of his classes. This was ruff for me because if i was ever criticized or stereotyped, I would never let it go to me. I would just brush it off and forget it.

x7michael7x said...

Michael Swisher
English 100
Cerritos
Post#22

Esme/Sandra

All musicians with a record label today are sellouts. Sellout simply means that they trying to setll music, rather than make music.....

Arcie

Sorry to hear about your little boy. Throw up is a lot more fun on tv than in person.

Kistos said...

Veronica Vasquez
English 103
Cerritos College
Post #17

The Writing Process

Like many, this is also my first time writing about this specific subject on stereotypes. It has also been a long time since I've written a paper starring myself and my experiences. I never felt comfortable writing about myself because then I would get a sense of "conceitedness" from my paper, or that I'm looking for pity. I'm really not sure why I felt that way about these papers in the past, but I am a bit more comfortable and confident now with the help of this class.

It was pretty difficult to find a specific stereotype that carried on from past to present, but once I found it I was able to write on future easily. So far, this essay has been one of my most difficult, as it's a lot easier to write about someone else than oneself.

Arcie said...

Arcelia Swarr
English 100
Cerritos
Post #lost track again

YUE:
Thank you for your kinds words! It can be scary, hard, draining, and everything else under the sun when little ones get sick, whether they're yours or not! it sounds like you and your little brother are really close. Your brother is lucky to be able to grow up so close to you!

MICHAEL:
Yeah, I agree 100%, throwing up is not fun at all in person!!

My son is FINALLY feeling better, and I'm hoping none of the other kids get sick! We had our big Relay For Life Cancer Walk this past Friday, and it went pretty good! My dad and step mom helped me set up our site and decorate for the event, and they helped with my sick Austin. The event started at 12noon on Friday, and went straight through until 12noon Saturday. We camped out there, like so many others, and didn't get much sleep, but we had a good time. Now I am home, catching up on homework I haven't been able to get to since Thursday night and preparing for the coming week.

I am really glad we are at the end of the writing process for our first paper! I have taken Mr. Hsiao's class before, so I had some idea of what he looks for in our writing, but that doesn't make the paper I wrote any easier! I had a hard time at first trying to think of labels that have been placed on me. I have had so many, both positive and negative, and I just completely blanked on what to write about. I have a hard time getting a good start on writing. Once I get started everything just sort of comes together though. The one thing I always have trouble with though is trying to fit a quote into my paragraph! I had such a hard time just finding a quote, let alone trying to work it into my story! It is always a challenge for me to use quotes from a story I've read and apply it to my story that I am writing, but I think I met the challenge. I was really grateful for all the feedback I got from every workshop, it was a tremendous help! I hope my paper will be a good jumping point for the rest of my work in this class!

Macey said...

Macey Lindsay-Clinton
English 110
Golden West College
Post #11

I Have A Dream by Martin Luther King Jr.

I really enjoyed reading MLK's speech because I have not read it since I was a lot younger. He starts out with saying he is happy to join with the people which I found to be one of the most important aspects of the speech, he is part of them. Instead of being unattainable and surreal person, he is there in the flesh and is relating himself to every one. This is further apparent later in the speech when he says that he wants his children to one day be judged by their character and not by there skin color. The importance of showing that you are human and that you are going through the same troubles as your audience makes you credible and more respected. He also uses A LOT of repetition to get his point across. The major theme repeated through the entire speech is the urgency of acting NOW. Justice must be attainted now so that the children of the future will be treated fairly and will never have to live as they were living then. The word satisfied is said a lot which will leave the listeners wondering if they are satisfied with the situation of today, and if not then the theme of acting now is further reinforced. Also this may be unimportant but I think it is very interesting that the two last and extremely repeated things he says rhyme, I have a dream, and let freedom ring. It seems almost poetic.

Kistos said...

Veronica Vasquez
English 103
Cerritos College
Post #18

President Barack Obama Acceptance Speech

An interesting point of view I found with reading this after MLK's speech is how one can see the transition of these times of hardships. Obama speaks of how far we have come from MLK, and that we have achieved a lot. All that MLK wishes for is now a reality in Obama's time of the speech, and the speech gives a sense of surrealism. By surreal, I mean how we cannot comprehend a future that we cannot imagine. We cannot believe how ignorant and cruel we were in the past, but at the time people felt it normal as we feel our current state to be normal.

When obama speaks of how imaginable the future is for us, I begin to wonder how much further we are going to go with equal rights. I have always thought it to be sad that we need "equal" rights to be part of our law, as we cannot depend on common sense to practice it. We have so many redundant laws just to protect ourselves, when in fact it is what we should practice as a people.

It was also very breathtaking to hear and read about the woman who has seen it all. For someone to witness the hardships from MLK, and to see the change we have come to must be such an extraordinary feeling.

Although it is a long step for equal rights, I still wish people could see past skin color, and praise Obama not for it, but for what he has to offer. A black president is no better than a white or asian president, but they all do have different things to offer our nation. Nonetheless, the speech was beautifully written, and marks a huge change in history.

Sarai Vazquez said...

Sarai Vazquez
English 100
Cerritos College
Post # 14?15 not sure

Writing Process

Getting this paper started was the biggest challenge for me on this paper. I could not think of anything to write about and was getting very frustrated with myself. It drove me crazy. It had been a while since I had written a paper and also I knew that Mr. Hsiao was going to be a hard grader so I was kind of nervous. The first paragraph was the hardest for me. I am the kind of person that has to write everything down before I do my final draft because I am such a scatter brain. I sometimes think that I put all my thoughts together but when other people read my paper they still say im too scattered. Once I got the first paragraph done I was happy because I kind of knew what my paper was going to be on. When we had to do the second paragraph, I was sorta lost because I did not know how I was supposed to write it. I felt like I had put everything I needed in the first paragraph so it took me a while to start writing and actually think it was pretty good. I could not wait until the third paragraph because I knew exactly what I was going to write about. Once I started writing it just flowed. I was so glad I actually got more than 5 pages. I hope I get a pretty good grade on this paper because I really worked hard on it.

LuLu24 said...

Edilu Medina
English 100
Cerritos
Post# 15

The LuLu writing process

At first when the assignment was announced all these thoughts rushed to my head. I started brainstorming and analyzing what is something that I can write passionately about, the subject was starring at me in the face. Once I get a thought in mind I don't stop writing as that becomes an issue, because my thoughts are everywhere. Especially not writing a paper in 3 years its hard for me to follow the structure! I know it sounds irrational, but its true on my case. Now my process has changed I require a lot of feed back, I been asking my friends; who are English majors. They give me a better view of perspective and structure to the right process even through difficulties. I think the most difficult part for me has been inserting the quotes to apply to my paper and the thesis.Overall my process has changed but I feel the same when I finish writing a paper. I have obtained more knowledge as I go and expect to become a better writer in the end.

cathrina86 said...

cathrina afusia
cerritos college
english 100

Reflection assignment

The writing process for my paper has flown pretty well. I can admit when I first started Mr. H’s class in English 52, I was shocked how much he was involved with the process of our papers. Normally teachers would just give me a prompt and a due date. This was not the case when I started the process that Mr. H has shown me as well as my classmates. To talk a little about the specific paper we are working on now, I was actually a little intimidated by the subject. Being stereotyped for someone you are not is a touchy subject. We all work so hard to uphold a specific image about ourselves and for someone to judge you otherwise can really get to a person. I did not let that stop me from writing my paper. I first thought about all the incidents I wanted to write about. I had to take myself back to those specific days. I had to gather my emotions from those days and apply it to my writing. Once that was done, we then would get into our groups and critique each others papers. I really appreciate the time that is given for us to go through this process. This part of the process is what helps me the most. I get to read my group mates papers and give my feedback. Sometimes I will read another’s paper and feel so much emotion and go back to my paper to see if it has the same affect. I love how we write our body paragraphs first. I think breaking down our paper gives us a better opportunity to create a paper worth reading. When I get to just focus on one paragraph at a time rather than the whole paper, I feel I get more out of my writing. I also always started my paper as soon as the assignment was given to me. With me working two jobs, I do not have a lot of time. The time I set aside for my writing is specifically for just that purpose. I do not stay up late to do my writing because most likely I will not be in my best state of mind. I am very productive and have learned to handle my time very wisely. Overall I believe that I have been taught a very successful writing process.

Diana Amezcua said...

Diana Amezcua
English 103
Cerritos College
Post #15

MY WRITING PROCESS

I have never been that great when it comes to writing essays, therefore I struggle a lot in the process. I feel this is even worse because I haven’t taken any English classes in about two years. I first, start by getting REALLY STRESSED OUT while deciding what exactly I want to write about. It is really hard for me to put in to words what I want to say. Even though, I know what I want to write about once I put it on paper it just doesn’t look right. But I guess that is what happens to everyone or at least almost everyone. It is just the process of writing; you write it, then revise it, then rewrite it and revise it again and again ‘till you get your final draft. And after all the hard work we go through, the final product is all worth it. I think that what has helped me the most about this essay is starting with the body paragraphs, instead of the intro. Indeed, I had always started writing my intro, followed by the body paragraphs but I found this process better. I really appreciate my classmates suggestions and comments about my paper. I would also like to thank George, because he has been a great help in breaking the essay down for me. I really do appreciate his patience and wiliness to help out. In sum, everything has a process and we just have to stick with it and make it work for our self. I find writing a paper NOT EASY AT ALL (and yes I sometimes hate doing it), but think that it is something I can really benefit from.

Anonymous said...

Monique Gutierrez
English 100
Cerritos College
Post #37

The Weather & Halloween, My Birthday

I love the morning fog that has been going on lately. To me, it is Halloween weather. I cannot wait for Halloween. Even though I'm not doing anything special this year! I'm just gonna stay in and watch some of my favorite horror movies. The fog looks kind of spooky too don't you think? On my way to work I can just picture a bunch of zombies coming out of the mist. I really want to go to Knotts Berry Farm's Halloween Haunt. Maybe I'll go for my birthday. I can't believe I'm gonna be 28 in a couple weeks. I honestly feel like I'm gonna be 40! I don't really get out much and I feel like such an old timer.

meeeechelle said...

Michelle Pachas
English 103
Cerritos College
Post #8

MLK speech

On August 28, 1963 a preacher from Georgia stood in front of a segregated United States and inspired a nation to come together creating a stance against social discrimination. Martin Luther King Jr.’s I have a dream speech has become one of the most recognized readings in the U.S. not only because of it’s powerful context, but also the impact that it had on a generation. His words were the cause for many citizens who had been watching the injustice take place from the sidelines demand equal rights. Much like Obama, Dr. King was a realist who understood that this change would not take place unless we were aware of the urgency of it and were willing to work for it ourselves. “This is no time to engage in the luxury of cooling off of or to take the tranquilizing drug of gradualism.” (6)
Dr. Kings ideas of peaceful protesting were another thing that I admired greatly about him. Like Gandhi, he chose a path of nonviolence to “fight” for his beliefs. His knowledge of tolerance went so far that he encouraged his followers not to make the same judgments their oppressors had made with them. “the negro community must not lead us to a distrust of all white people…their destiny is tied up with our destiny.” (8) It takes a strong man to not let anger take over his emotions when hatred was being shown to all his friends and even himself.
Forty-six years later Martin Luther King’s dream has become reality. Not only has segregation been demolished, but our current President is African American. We still have a long way until we can say that our country grants every person equal rights. But it is still inspiring to see how far we have come.

Diana Amezcua said...

Diana Amezcua
English 103
Cerritos College
Post # 16

Martin Luther King’s I Have A Dream

There are a lot of similar facts on Martin Luther King’s speech, and what I believe it’s God desired out come on us. Indeed, Martin Luther King speech was very similar to what a priest would say to those listening to his sermons.

He starts off by talking about a dream, where there will be no segregation between whites and black, and many other races. And that is also what God tells us through the priest’s sermons in church. Priest talk about loving our brothers and sisters like we love our self. “Now is the time to rise from the dark and desolate valley of segregation to the sunlit path of racial justice. Now is the time to lift out nation from the quick sands of racial injustice to the solid rock of brotherhood. Now is the time to make justice a reality for all of God’s children.” In this quote he was talking about uniting as a family to break those walls that prevent us from getting along. Isn’t he also saying now is the time to straighten up or act of darkness and evil and head in to the light. Indeed, I find it to be a way of saying repented of your sins and change your injustice ways, into equality and respect.

When Martin Luther King talks about his dream he describes ‘paradise’. Indeed, a paradise where everyone would get along; respect, love, and not have to worry about one’s religion, social background, or color of skin. And isn’t this what we are all looking forward for, after we die. I know I am. A place of our own, were we can feel we belong, be in peace, and yes FREE at last.
FREE AT LAST! FREE AT LAST!
THANK GOD ALMIGHTY, WE ARE FREE AT LAST!

Anonymous said...

Monique Gutierrez
English 100
Cerritos College
Post #38

My Writing Process

Ever since I was a little girl, I have enjoyed writing. I used to write random short stories and keep them hidden safely in this light blue pillow case in my bedroom closet. Some of the stories did not make sense at all. They were mostly just fairytales about the prince rescuing the princess and stuff like that. But, I remember just cherishing these stories. If my mother had not have thrown them out(spring cleaning) I would have collected them all and made a big book out of them. If only I could remember them word for word. Now, I am in my third English class and I am learning new things about the writing process. If I were to write a story about a princess, I would have to go into detail on the journey the prince would have to endure to seize his princess. I would have to write about the turmoil the princess experienced while she was captured. I have to learn to dig deep and scratch much more than the surface. Writing to me is very therapeutic. People write in their diaries their deepest darkest secrets. Others keep a notepad by their nightstand ,so when they wake up from a horrible dream, they could jot down the key points so that they can understand their dreams. The hardest part of the writing process for me is using “Big” words. “Big” words is the one word that you could use instead of a bunch of words in a sentence. For example, “I accidentally bumped into this guy at a party and it was worth it cause now we’re a couple.” Instead of that I can say, “Meeting my boyfriend was serendipitous.” I have to constantly be looking at a thesaurus or dictionary to help me with words. When I hear people talk in class that use “Big” words, I get a little jealous. Because I wish I can talk like that. Like I know what I am talking about. I really should have paid attention in high school when my English teacher quizzed us on words. Sometimes I consider reading a big dictionary so that I can learn more. The other part of the writing process I am stuck on is the IC DC thing. I think I am okay with adding the commas and stuff, but identifying them by IC DC is confusing. Does anyone else get it?

meeeechelle said...

Michelle Pachas
English 103
Cerritos College
Post #9

Homonyms Essay

!@#$%^

Ok, this is a really time consuming paper. I feel like the editing is endless. I’m definitely surprised because a 3-5 pager usually doesn’t take that long, but I seem to never be satisfied with what I come up with. I have a feeling that my final draft will look nothing like what I began with. The biggest challenge is probably the fact that this is a paper about myself. I have never been a very open about my feelings. Especially in my writing. I hoping I’m able to break through this struggle and really write with heart.

Anonymous said...

Sarika Vaswani
English 103
CC
Post # 1dk

WRITING IS HARD

I don't know why, but I have always found writing to be very difficult for me. I think everyone at some point struggles with something when it comes to academics, and my weakness would have to be writing. When given an assignment, whether it's to write a paragraph, a page, or several pages, my brain turns to mush and I draw blanks. I literally freeze up and beads of sweat form on my forehead. It takes a long time for me to calm down, analyze, and put my thoughts onto paper. I have always been this way. Taking professor Hsiao's class semester has helped me tremendously. His distinct writing process as well as help from friends has allowed me to better my writing skills/habits. I am a shy person and I tend to keep to myself, so at first I found it difficult to write about myself and I found the workshops to be uncomfortable. It was hard putting emotion and honesty in my papers. Since it was required of me, I tried my best to do it. I opened old wounds and let my mind wander down memory lane. After a while I realized how much easier it had become to write about myself and my experiences versus writing a research paper. I enjoyed it more too.

Our assigned paper on Homonyms, has not been an easy journey. It was difficult just to understand the piece, so I thought how in the world am I going to write a paper on this?! What's so great about having parts of our paper due at different intervals is that it forces me to just write, whether I'm doing it correctly or not, I have a start.. I have something to go with. It helps me to get the ball rolling. The workshops have been helpful. Having someone else's feedback is always beneficial. Initially I didn't like where my paper was going. It didn't flow or seem to make sense so I decided to start over. Incorporating the quotes from Homonyms was a mission and It was hard to figure out a stereotype/label that carried on from past to present. Now that I finally have, my paper seems to be coming a long much better.

NOTE: Be careful of your sentence structure!
Good luck to everyone!

Anni ^_^ said...

Ana Cervantes
English 100
Cerritos College
Post# ??

Writing Process

I personally enjoyed this new way of writing an essay. I was use to first staring with my intro but with Mr. Hsiao we start with our body paragraphs first. At first I thought it was going to be difficult for me, but i realize that it actually worked for my advantage. I think from now on I'm going to start my essays that way. The workshops are really help full, because my other classmates obtain a better understanding of run ons and fragments than i do sometimes. The advice they give me is a constructive one not a negative one. And this essay actually came at a good time. The reason for this is that writing about the label i use to stuggle with help me make an imporatnt choice in my life. I use to stuggle with the label of being a bastard child and is until now that i can write about it and express myself about this subject. But most imporatnt it has cleared my mind on actually wanting to contact my father. I'm going to Mexico soon and i'm going to confront my father that i have not seen in a very long time. This paper clear my mind on how i see myself and what i want to portrait to him when he sees me.

Brittany Williams said...

Brittany WIlliams
English 110
GWC
Post #22 (?)

Michelle - I feel your pain! I have been working on my paper ALL DAY!!! I feel as though I am going a little crazy. I simply can not think any more. I have decided to retire for the night and pick back up tomorrow. Best of luck to you!

Brandon - Props on the JC quote!

To the rest of you - I hope you all had a great weekend!

The King in Yellow said...

Jon Croft
English 110
Golden West College
Post #16

My Writing Process

First, Jon takes fingers. He then places fingers on keyboards. He pushes keys to make the letters that make the words. He then press the space bar to make words not have undistance between them. He occasionally presses enter to makes new paragraph. He press print to make paper inking machine make words appear on paper. He submit to teacher. World is saved.


I do not believe this is what you ask, in truth. I think you wish to know Jon's secrety secrets, yes? Jon does not disclose these things, so you will not know. His writing process is like secret of when characters in book go to bathroom: if you knew, it not be mystery anymore. Once horse is out of box, you cannot lead to chicken countings. So you see, these secrets of the belonging to Jon are best left to the not never unknowing of things.

Sarai Vazquez said...

Sarai Vazquez
English 100
Cerritos College
Post # 15

OK so I love that it is football season!! All i have done today is watch football. It makes me happy inside! I swear I am like a boy. I sit infront of my TV screaming at the refs like I am there or something. That is what makes it fun though?! Am I right? Oh how I love the weekends! I am so happy the Trojans won yesterday! it is good to have Barkley back in the lineup! They did pretty darn good yesterday! Washington did not score until the 4th quarter! That is how you do it SC!! WOO-HOO!
Oh how I love football! Oh and did you see Favre's last minute winning pass?!?!? Holy cow that was so sick!! And MIchael Vick was back today. He did pretty good. How the heck did the Steelers lose today?!? That blew my mind! And former Trojan Mark Sanchez did amazing today!! I just love him! He is so good! And of course Eli Manning and the Giants won!! I love Eli :)
OK I am done with my football rant for the night..... We shall see how the Cardinals do because it is not looking too good right now. Cults:31 Cards:10 4th quarter with 11:31 to go.. I am kind of rooting for the underdog! Go Cards *fingers crossed* more like wishful thinking

Brittany Williams said...

Brittany Williams
English 110
GWC
Post 23

I Have a Dream by Martin Luther King Jr.

“I have a dream.” These iconic words have penetrated the heart of each generation since they were first spoken in 1963. It is through this influential speech that Martin Luther King Jr. tells of a people, downcast for centuries. Though significant to our nation’s history, I, a bit embarrassed to say, have never personally read through this notorious speech. In doing so, however, I quickly became fond of the hopeful rhetoric he used to inspire a people who had experienced so much oppression. What I found especially inspiring was the line in which he says, “let us not seek to satisfy our thirst for freedom by drinking from the cup of bitterness and hatred.” A man, surrounded by hate, chose to love. May we follow in his wisdom.

Gabsters101 said...

Gabriela Tovar
English 103
Cerritos College
Post #16

I like the number 16...

When i chose the topic i am doing for my paper, i chosed it for one good reason... I felt that it was going to be a good thing for me. kind of like therapy... It hurts me everytime i think about that event, i cannot believe it happened to me... I was not sure why it happened to me but if there is a god, please let it be for a good reason why that happened... For those that want to know what happened to me, why am i in pain, why i am scared to go get a job, why i cannot trust another black person, please let me know so i can tell you my story or you can read it... Other than that, this paper is hard for me, it is not easy to write down something intimate, embarrassing and shameful, its sad. Sad that i am going to let other people know what happened to me that i think it should not had happened to me... I am a good person, i am a hard worker, i am a very loyal person, so why the **** did someone abused of their power they had and literally abused me in the most horrible way??? I do not understand why there are people like that in the world???

If you guys never heard of this book: WHY BAD THINGS HAPPENED TO GOOD PEOPLE i forgot by who, you guys should read it... It is very good... It tells stories of how a bad deed happened to a really really good person... READ IT... or else...

Thanks...

Gabsters101 said...

Gabriela Tovar
English 103
Cerritos College

Friday was my boyfriends 22nd birthday and his family threw him a little get together... His aunts, cousins, frineds were all at his house... It is such a shame though that his own girlfriend did not gave him a present... :(... Real shame... oh well, thats what happens when you do not have a job and the only money one gets goes to the phone bill... He says he is okay with it, but really c'mon tell me, would you be okay if your girfriend\boyfriend does not give you a present on your birthday???
To top it all off, it was our three year anniversary... Oh shit... I am so sorry baby...

Anyways, Saturday was an awesomeness day for me... I went to the Power 106 Comedy Fiesta...
My first time seeing Carlos Mencia, Gabriel Iglesias, Cheech & Chong, and many other more... When Cheech and Chong were doing their thing, it came to me that they were not so funny, then i realized that you needed to be high to understand the jokes (seriously).... Gabriel Iglesias couldn't have been any more funnier... He was cracking me up every second... Overall, it was fun...
Sunday, Sunday... Well it is today and what i did was go to the movies with the boyfiend and friends to see Surogates with Bruce Willis... Awesomeness movie... Now i am just at my boyfriends house chillin and doing homework...

I will see you guys at class tomorrow...

See ya laterz...

xdecibeth said...

Ibeth Rodriguez
English 100
Cerritos College
Post #16??

My Writing Process

I have never been the greatest writer neither I have been someone that feels comfortable with what I write. So far in my previous English classes my writing assignments have been easy, they tell me two write about a topic and I write. My previous professors have given me a topic to write about for example about global warming, society, or even about people watching too much television, these are topics that we do not have to put too much emotions in our writing. They tell me to write and I simply write without showing what I feel about the situation. I know that in Professor Hsiao's class is going to be different. So far I have felt that I have not expressed my feelings on my writing, but in Professors Hsiao's I know that it will be something that I will have to do. In order to get the grade I want for that class I need to write my papers with my feelings. I tend to hold back on what I write simply because I have never had anything interesting to write about, but when it comes to process of my writing that is where things change. When I write my papers I start the first day the assignment is give to me. I learned from personal experience that procrastinating pays off in a very negative way, I learned my lesson and I am never doing it again. Before I start writing my papers I have to sit down and just write little ideas that I have for my paper. I write and write and when I finally have everything that I am going to talk about I start putting them in order, I organize what I am going to write about for every paragraph. I try to spend as much time in making my writing better, sometimes I will spend hours trying to make my writing more informative and visual. I want to make the reader feel like in love and interested with my writing. Just how I am very careful and try my best in writing my papers I also have things to work on. I want to become more specific with my writing. When I write I get to a specific point, I want to add more details to my writing so it can make my writing much more interesting. With the techniques that I have learned over the years in how to write a paper and with the new things that I am going to lean in Mr. Hsiao's class I know I will write my perfect paper that I am going to be so proud of.

cellycell said...

Celina Rivera
English 100
Cerritos College
Post# 36

A Reflection

English use to be one of my favorite subjects. I loved English because of all the writing I would do. I think as I stopped attending school for a while my writing has gotten worse. My writing process can be great because I start with so many ideas. Most of the time my mind is like a kid in a candy store, my mind start to wonder all over with everything I want. My thoughts tend to get jumbled. Writing process I have is I am writing or re-writing my topic over and over. I like being able to edit what I wrote, so that I can fix my thought or ideas. I really liked that we had to turn in papers throughout because I would have been lost. I know that Mr. Hsaio told us to be positive, but it is a bit hard when you have writers block.

I know that Michael said that Mr. Hsaio gave us an outline. For some people that is great, and for other not so great. I do not want him to do all my work, but when you have not written papers in along time. The other things in that I am a harsh opinion on my paper. Even though my paper may sound great I still find a something wrong. When I find something wrong I tend to find more and then I redo my paper about a hundred times.

Tessy Baby said...

Tess Elizondo
English 100
CC
Post #8

Writing Process
This essay by far is the most difficult for me too write on. I know its only going to get harder. The most difficult part of my paper is the introduction. I have a hard part with the thesis. I either place the thesis in the wrong part of the paragraph or do not place it all. Its really hard for me to get started on a paper. Coming up with the past, present, and future is a little struggling, but nothing I cannot handle. Where do I begin with the details to my paper? I struggled last semester with not incorporating details or not having enough. I also want to the paragraphs to flow together. I want the past to explain the present which will probably lead to the future of my labeling process. I must admit bringing up the past kind of hit a nerve. It was sort of difficult to write on, but I am glad Im getting it out of the way. I am so glad Mr. Hsiao gives us the opportunity in class for our group members to revise our essay and give us tips to make the paper that much better.

Raufiel M. said...

Raufiel Matias
English 110
GWC
post #9

Writing process

Writing about our cave is a challenging process for me. When Professor H. first mentioned about this paper, I was stuck for about a couple of days just thinking about what to write. It made the writing extra challenging because this paper is about us, and having to dig up my inner self just to write this paper was hard because I'm not use to opening up about my personal life and writing it in an essay. First page body paragraph of our essay was due and I wasn't really sure about the cave that I was writing about. Doing the workshops helped because getting feedback from the people in my group gave me different options of how I should write my paper. Also, having to look at my paper for hours, some of my grammar got mixed up so having them check it for me also helped a lot. So, those workshops are important for me and for all the students in our class because it gives me other ideas that I can add to my paper. Plus, just thinking about what to write for hours gets me stuck in some point and once I hit that road block in my head it'll take me quite some time before my ideas gets rolling again. This writing process of Allegory of the Cave is also a great experience because it challenges and expands my mind into a different level of writing and it's something that I haven't done before. So, it's all good.

jaime Valadez said...

Jaime Valadez
English 100
Cerritos College
Post # 13

Writing Process

Overall i am finding myself struggling to write this paper.It has been a while since i had to write this much and never in my life have i had to wrote in so much detail. Im writing about my cave and i have never really shared it with anyone so it makes me a little nervous.Im glad we spend so much time talking in our groups and as a class about our assignments and that makes it much easier to understand. Now my main obstacle that i want to overcome is learning and understanding the ic,dc. I know that i can count on my professor and also my classmates to better understand this. Another obstacle i want to overcome is my time management. Sometimes i find it hard to do my homework when i hold two jobs aside from school and volunteer with my community. Im going to stick with school because my goal is to one day have my A.A degree.

dylanpatan said...

Adrian Moreira
English 100
Cerritos College
Post # 17

Writing

I have no idea if my essay is done or not. The more I re-read it, the more I want to change it and leave the same all at once. It is getting frustrating. I have had a few different people read it to get their feedback. People outside of class that is. Evelyn read it. She liked it. My friend Carlo read it. He said it was good too. Then my friend Luis read it and he said that it needed work. I knew he would say that. He graduated from Cal Berkeley with a Bachelor's in English so I take his critique seriously. So I am still working on it. It helped to have a fellow classmate read it and give me tips and ideas on what to change or fix. It is nice to hear people I love and care about tell me that they like what I have written so far also. This whole experience has been a challenge. I think I am a decent writer and I want this essay to be something that I can be proud of. I think it is almost there. My dream (MLK style) would be that Prof. Hsiao use my essay as an example for future classes. That would be top notch! Even if it is not used, I would like to get a good grade on this essay. I hope that I was of some help for my fellow classmates with their papers. Well Jenny at least since it was her paper that I was helping out with. Jenny, you will never be just a snoring loud mouth to me! I better get back to working on my paper. Oh and thanks a lot Prof. Hsiao. All this writing and re-reading of my paper has made me have dreams where English is involved.

Raufiel M. said...

Raufiel Matias
English 110
GWC
Post #10

President Barack Obama Acceptance Speech

Reading both MLK's and President Obama's speech was quite an enjoyable experience because of my imagination coming in while reading it. When President Obama mentioned in his speech about how far we've come as a country regarding the changes that happened since the slavery, it came to my mind about MLK's speech. There was a transition in time from MLK's speech from the past mentioning that all the people should be treated equal regardless of the color of their skin. Switching to the President's speech in the future from MLK's he mentioned that we've already passed those barriers of all the color skin people coming together, we must now work together as a whole to make our country better. Another part where the President mentioned about the past was when he mentioned about Ann Nixon Cooper who was born an era past slavery and lived all those years and have seen, heard, and felt all the changes that happened in our country. President Obama wants us to work together for our country to succeed, so he always mentioned "Yes we Can."

ANDEEZY said...

Andy Tran
Eng 100
Cerritos College
Post #12 I think?

My Writing Process

First off, I really much enjoyed the writing process of our papers. Starting out with the main body paragraphs rather than starting with the introduction is a great way to get your paper flowing. In my case, the hardest part of writing my paper was what I was going to write about. The topic was very broad and so I had to think carefully. It had to be something interesting and deep within me that many people have not seen nor sense in me. Something that could flow straight from my heart and onto the paper. Most importantly something that I could share with others. I finally agreed with myself to write and share to everyone, a dark story of my life and how I shed light on myself. Like Mr. Hsiao says, "you have to cut open a vein." I had to relive my ignorant past and bring it back in order to finally fully recognize and overcome my problem. Writing a paper about yourself is a great topic to write about. It's great because you can almost never run out of anything to say.

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Belinda said...

Belinda Reed
English 100
Prof. Hsiao
Cerritos

My Writting Process

My writting process has improved tremendously since last fall, and only two english classes later.
I have learned that if one I make a well organized outline to follow, than the paper usually has a good body flow. I enjoy putting my thoughts on paper, It's a really good way to vent and I find it to be relaxing.

FallenAngel_23 said...

Brian Jimenez
English 100
CC
Post #20

The Writing Process
Maybe to most writing comes easy but to me it is hardwork. I never had an essay were we are suppose to open up and add details. The way I was taught was to write condensed and to the point paragraphs which now makes me wonder why we never were taught that way. I still try my best at everything I do not just give up but continue pushing on. My essay is diffcult and challeging but it is on Allegory of the Cave. I think the most diffcult part was constructing the introduction paragraghs for I was getting confused with mapping our sentences and the thesis sentence but I feel I got it correct now. My essay dealt with how I reached and overcame my cave. How I witnessed my own escape from the cave which was my parents who did not support nor let me fully experience a certain sport . Though I thought I was never going to get the respect and support from my parents I never gave up in reaching that light. In the end I got my support I wanted but my parent only concern was of me getting injured. In the end of all my struggles’ I learned to be self confident in my beliefs, to be responsible and to be brave.

For those who are having problems with grammer just have a great number of people revise it. I have my family,friends in other english class's,co-workers and anyone else who can help you. If you want an A on this paper everyone should give it there all. Even if your not pushing for that A everyone should still try your hardest.

Anonymous said...

Dalene Kolb
English 110
Golden West College
Post #29

Brittany:
Your welcome. Yeah I just love his books. I started reading them when I found out we share the same birthday, New Years Eve. He is such an amazing author. What is your favorite book from him? Its a tie between The Last Song and The Bend in the Road. Both amazing.

Stephanie:
Of course I would correct your paper. And thank you. I did not know you enjoyed my feedback that much.

~Dalene

Anonymous said...

Dalene Kolb
English 110
Post #30

The Writing Process:
To start off The Writing Process is horrible. Sorry Mr. Hsiao. It is not you I promise. I just do not like editing papers over and over again. LOL. But I need to get over that especially the fact that I would like to become an editor. I was just kidding, it is not that bad. It is actually very helpfull. I was able to open up, which I was unable to do until now. I learned I tend to have tons of fragments. I need to work on that. I was told that I am a great writer. Thank you by the way. That boosted my self esteem. I enjoyed the way we worked on the papers and then did peer editing. To hear, or actually see what other people had to say about your writing helps. Instead of just writing the paper and turning it in, we had the chance to make the paper pretty much prefect. Or I hope so. I have been working on this paper it seems non-stop since we received this assigment. Not a fan of writing, and rewriting the paper, but enjoyed being able to open up. Like Mr. Hsiao said, we will open up in this class. Well guess what, Dalene has finally opened up. Now I am talking to myself via third person. Oh the fun in that. So hopefully the papers coming up are just as interesting, and nerve racking to write.

~Dalene

sonicspeed said...

Freddy Villalobs
English 103
CC
Post #10
President Barack Obama Acceptance Speech

The first thing i would like to say is wow. I can feel the intesity and the way he sayed that speech. i did not watch his speech on any Televison, did not hear the speech on any radio, or heard it from other people. i just visualised hi,m speaking and the wayu he has for words surprise me. I could really say he got to to the American people and they way he brougth those poeple and thank him. he used past presidents an an example and typical people from the here and now. he used people, idead, and the New deals as a boost to his spech.all in all i found it very interesting and relaxing reading this speech.

Jan921 said...

Janice Silva
English 103
Cerritos College
Post#11

writing process

I contradicted myself so many times in this paper. I was always sheltered when i was younger so stereotypes did not come often as other people think they would. I had to re write and still have to fix many things in this paper cause i know i can polish it to tell other's what i feel rather than just a straight through paper. Going through this process made me look on my life and how i was treated or am treated. I do not like to write about myself, I find that to be the hardest topic to write about because i am my worst critique. I always see myself as abstract because i cannot find a specific point to write about, or not important enough for me to remember and forget about. It is just so hard to comprehend who i am at times, and i find this paper diffiuclt to write and get to because i am always uncertain of who i am. I am going to keep working on this paper, and honestly will not be complete till the actually dude date because i am always re arranging.

Crazymommy said...

Jenny Guzman
English 100
Cerritos College
Post #1000000000000

If only I could write better.

I am person that likes to express myself in writing. The problem is my grammar is not that good. When I was suppose to be taught the basic grammar skills I fell through the cracks. I was in a private school where one is self taught. I being a child with A.D.D never grasp how important it was to me to take my work seriously. I just did what was necessary to pass the class and not worry about the grammar. I now know who that writing is fundamental in one life. I being embarrassed about my writing made me want to go back to school.

Like I stated I love to write. I feel I can do my 5 pages essay in like an hour. I will write whatever that pops in my head. The problem when I do the essay in an hour it is a Grammar nightmare. It makes professors question why they went in to teaching. Luckily in this class I can review, rewrite and workshop my papers.

My writing process has not been a bad experience, or stressful, but I feel it has been a therapeutic experience. I am an open book and people can ask me anything they want, but how does snoring come in to a conversation. This paper has given me an outlet for any resentment, or fear I may have with my snoring.

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Carlos Plaza
English 103
Cerritos College
Post #7

Obama Speech

Its funny how we read the Obama speech and the MLK speech at the same time. In one speech we hace a pastor fighting for the rights of blacks. Then we read the Obama speech and we have our first black president thanking his campaign team for helping with the election. Who would have thought that the US would have a black president? The change has only begun. It started with the election the election of the first black president and now we have to keep it going.

sonicspeed said...

Freddy Villalobos
English 103
CC
Post #11

well first of about this essay i would say it was fun learning andwriting in new ways. i know ive been lagging it a few times or doig it late at niogth bt in others words i found it nice and a bit relaxing compared to youre other essays. i have done everything exept the 2nd body paragraph, however i will do it but it will become a surpise for others. i canot wait untill we do the other essay were i will truly feel the reaserch i have done and going to do to meet your and my peers expectation.

Crazymommy said...

Jenny Guzman
English 100
Cerritos College
Post idunno

HW

Why in a house with 6 computers I can only do my Homework at work? Seriously, when I ask someone if I can use the computer to do my homework they get crazy and want to start a fight. I would understand if I want to kick them off if I went on MySpace or something, but it is to actually do homework. Even, when I am on the blogosphere my dad is all "are you sure you doing homework?"

So just needed to vent a bit. AAHH!!

Christina said...

Christina Arredondo
English 103
C.C
Post: 12

In the speech "I Have A Dream," by Martin Luther King Jr. points out how even after 1863 when Abraham Lincoln signed the Emanciipation Proclamation,people of color are still segregated. They are treated unequal. In his speech the readers are able to notice how intensed, much feeling is put into it and how he never lost hope in getting their rights. He has faith of one day the people of color will be able to retrive their place. Not only will dey gain it, but they will also get it the right way not in a violent manner. They are not going to seek revenge. On the contrary, they are going to make them realize that their freedom should be side by side with theirs. Luther King Jr. knew that one day they will be free. However, until then the shall not attack for whatever reason and they will stand strong.

cutebutcrazyj said...

Jasmyne Young
English 110
GWC
Post #11
I Have A Dream- MLK Jr.
For me, he started out kind of slow. He is very descriptive, but this speech did not start with a bang! Then, he finally gets the flow going. His words become very powerful. The symbolism He uses paints a horribly beautiful picture in your mind of the continued oppression of Blacks back then. He then strengthens and lightens the mood when he starts talking about his dream. His dream of having ALL people seen as people, not as their skin. His dream of having ALL people come together as one, not as superior to inferior, as equals. MLK wanted America to stay true to its promise of freedom for all men. Freedom and equality for all is what America was founded on and Martin Luther King Jr. wanted that to be shown not only to whites, but Blacks as well.
MLK had a dream, of equal oppurtunity for all peoples. Yes, there is a certain peace between all peoples, there is a certain amount of equality , America has kept up its promises. But, are ALL people truly free in this country? Or do people choose to believe that they are? Is there really equality in this country? Or do people just deal with one another because America is so diverse? The ultimate question is, has Martin Luther King Jr.'s dream really come true? I do not believe it truly has.

Christina said...

Christina Arredondo
English 103
C.C
Post:13

In president Barack Obama's Acceptance Speech, he explains everything is possible. For example, in Martin Luther King's Jr. speech, it talks about people of color are being mistreated and unequal. However, now, Barack Obama is a person of color and he is the president of the United States Of America. Many people believed that having a person of color was impossible. The only criteria of a person being able to be president was a white person. The only thing that people needed to have was faith and patience because when it is the right time for it to happen, it's going to happen. He gives credit to those who helped him in any way and shows how himm as president is a victory for us. In addition, he points out how there are struggles rightnow that need to be resolved. With the help that he has America will continue to go far...

When he gave out his speech I was there see it. However, now that I am reading, it is amazing how perfectly everything is written. He uses presidents from the past and the people.

Christina said...

Christina Arredondo
English 103
C.C
Post: 14

Essay for Homonyms

In had difficulties in my writing process for my essay. I did not know where to start. I could not decide which classification for me to use. At first, I thought I had made my decision, and wrote about it. Then, for the following draft, I ended changing it for something else that was more personal. It helped out a lot because I was able to really put feeling into it. At some point, it got to me because it made me remember of the whole scene when I was classified and other incidents related to it (it all explains in my essay). In addition, I was not able to decide on how should I do the structure for the essay. Therefor, I just wrote the paragraphs seperately, and at the very end I chose how for it to be. I did have to change a couple of things around because of the order. Then, I left off the the quotes from Homonyms to be the last thing. Surprisingly, I had less trouble on finding quotes for my essay. Overall, I think that it was pretty difficutl on writing this essay compared to the ones that I have done in my past. Hopefully, I did a good job on it though

WldntULikToKno said...

Samantha Shepherd
English 103
Cerritos College
Post # 465753486763456457341537

When I started reading Martin Luther's speech, I couldn't help but think of that one joke (I won't say it on here because it's really racist...). Then after when I was done with the speech, I actually considered myself moved and touched. I think that his speech was so eloquent and inspiring it made me want to (in a weird way) change races and become a black person and go back in time to actually be there and be present for that speech. I can only imagine the electricity in the air when everyone around heard that speech. I love the diction he used to instill that feeling in the people of that time. I also love the specific words he chose that actually have relevance in our country, not only with the African-American race. For example, "Let freedom ring." That is a song that has leapt from the lips of so many white Americans, yet it was sang untrue. It was kind of like giving all the prejudiced people a taste of their own medicine. The repeition of some phrases such as, "I have a dream" and "Let from ring" added strength and audacity to the speech. Antoher thing I wanted to point out that I really liked was the comparison of freedom with that of a bank and cashing a check. I think that people then could really relate to the concept of a "bad check" because of the Great Depression. All in all, a fantastic speech. Kudos, MLK Jr.

Anonymous said...

Rayray J
Ingles 103
CC
post # r

the dreaded writing process-


Kennedy said that we would put a man on the moon not because it was easy but because it was hard.
This essay is my moon.

Creativity isnt like a switch that i can turn on and off, for me it just comes and goes and thats what makes writing dificult and fun simultaneously. I often find myself sitting aimlessly in front of my laptop trying to conquer writer's block. When those fleeting moments when the light bulb does go on, I usually just flow with it and let the wind take me, well in this case, wherever the light points my fingers and the keys on the keyboard take me. Im going to admit, and this is against my better judgement, that most of the time, i am against pre writing. i find that when i write in the heat of the moment, the end result is something more personal. This technique can only serve me so far. It only works when the paper is something that we draw from our own experience. If this was a research paper, this would be another story...or another blog
=]

☣T Я I N I☣ said...

Maria Ascencio
English 100
Cerritos College
Post #12

Writing Process

Ugh! I do not think I have gotten my point through. When I reread it, I feel like there is still so much that I have not written about, but I just do no know what to add. Then again, I feel that it is ok. While writting it, since it is so personal, I actually wrote it teary eyed and choking up as I poured my emotions out onto my writting. I wrote it while no one was at home so they would not see me cry lol. While writting, I felt like I was reliving that moment, and man! it sucked. Since it is an essay about ourselves, it is so much easier to write in so much detail, I do not see why people think it is hard to write details. I do not think my paper is done yet, I still feel there is more to tell. I will be anxious to see what I get as a grade. There is son many things we have to focus on that sometime you focus one a couple specific things and forget about the rest. I have noticed improvement in my wrtting though. Although I am not satified with it yet, when I read over its I feel like, "Wow, I wrote this?" It is kind of hard to believe. For the most part I did not have trouble writing it. What I found hard was the conlcluscion. I do not like it. I think I still have to work on it.

Anonymous said...

Rayray J
Ingles 103
post # s

Obama's speech
(saw this on tv, wish i was there to see it but it looked hella cold)


I would have to say that Mr. Obama is one great orator. This isnt the first time i encountered this (refer above). What is remarkable about this speech, and this goes for MLK's as well, is their creative use of visually suggestive language. Obama was able to grab hold of my senses and my emotion and make that connection. Aside from his wonderful use of language, being of different skin complexion, obama was able to trascend the demons of the past and affirm that change is inevitable. His victory demonstrates there is so much that our eyes fail to tell us.

Jan921 said...

Janice Silva
English 103
Cerritos College
Post#12

Obamas Acceptance Speech

At first he speaks about how the american people wanted change in this country; how it does not matter what race, gender, disabled or not, your voice is still heard. Change comes to america, he implies, how the american voice is finally heard from that night. He then speaks about the economy and how bad it is, that the people did choose him because they believed he was the best man to get us out of turmoil. That people all around see that the United States is going to be different, but to him a good difference. At the end he speaks about a women that is 106, that she was born in generation past slavery, and at a time women were silenced. She has seen the changes throughout her time, how history has changed, and now her seeing a new change. He speaks about the progress america has had over the years and how it constantly changes. He speaks very much about change in his speech, with an ending of "Yes We can", and a thank you and a god bless to the american people.

Gabsters101 said...

Gabriela Tovar
English 103
Cerritos College
Post #17

President Obama's Speech...

I liked the way he was giving thanks to all that were with him all the way, that shows great leadership... What i liked the most though, was on the first line he said, "If there's anyone out there who still doubts that America is a place where all things are possible... tonight is your answer..." gets me wondering that America is a great place to live, even though we are in so much debt, we are going to make it better... Also, Obama didn't just say that he was going to be the one that is going to make America better, he said WE are going to make America better... It is not the president who is going to work by himdelf, we all are... I wonder who has done their part... It is true that at the beginning will be tough, it is not going to take a year or maybe four, it can take more time than that... It just hurts me to see that immigration is not becoming a big topic... the time will come Gaby...

abstractxbeauty said...

Samantha Navarro
English 103
Cerritos College
Post #idk

Speeches:

The attitude of America is always going through a change. Both speeches emphasize that it is time for change. MLK says that blacks should not have to live this life just because it has been handed to them. MLK made it an awareness. Now that this country has for the most part moved from this way of thinking, we now have new challenges, as Obama emphasizes in his speech. Both speeches emphasize that it is up to us to want to change to be happier and live a better life. If we keep living the way others expect us to live, or living a certain way just because of custom, we would never change. America has the capability to be aware when something is not working the right way.

WldntULikToKno said...

Samantha Shepherd
English 103
Cerritos College
Post # 465753486763456457341537 + 1 ;]

The Writing Process


I actually liked the writing process. I was never really used to working on essays so much before turning it in, until the last summer session when I took English 100 with Professor Lovejoy who gave us an essay once a week, but did not have us turn them in until the end of the course. She made me very fond of the writing an essay and going back and peer-reviewing it several times before actually turning it in. Then, when I got to this class and I realized it was sort of the same way I was extremely pleased. I think that writing like this actually allows you to take a good look at what you're good at and what you need improvement with in writing. I also believe that is even more true with the essay on Homonyms. I think that writing so specifically about three specific events (two real and one future) really makes you not only look at your writing skills, but inside yourself and the kind of restrictions that we have in society that we really don't like. I think picking one was the hardest because there are so many, but once I got to writing it, I found that it was hard to stop (my problem is sometimes that I write too much instead of just enough, but that was great that we had to be super specific in this essay- I'm in improv so I live off of specifics). It was easier for me to write the paragraph about when the present because it had just happened and an incident in the past was harder to be more specific about because I couldn't recall everything quite as easily. It really raised my awareness that I don't like to be thought of as a flirt (unless I really am flirting ha ha) and seen as just a promiscuous girl. I have higher morals and standards than that and people just need to know that I am just an easy-going, fun-loving person. I have also realized that, oh well, some people aren't going to be able to see past those kinds of things (such as my guy friend's girlfriend's) even after they get to know me or after I tell them straight up I'm not interested in anyone else but my boyfriend, but that is just something that I have to deal with and not let it get to me. So to sum everything up, I really liked the essay. So now here's some kudos for you Mr. H.

J! said...

Jonathan Aguilar
English 103
Cerritos College
Post #18

Obama's Acceptance Speech

President Obama delivered a great speech that hit to heart for millions. It inspired many not only to believe what he was telling us what he planned to do; but inspired us to progress. I saw him deliver this speech on televsion and was blown away. The way the President delivered his speech gave me goose bumps. Some will say this is all he does. All he does is give great speeches but cannot deliver with action. Some say he is not the best leader for us. Well, part of being a leader is bringing your people's spirit up. And this is what he does in this speech. He gives a kind of tranquility. He puts us at ease and lets us know that change will not happen over night. It was a great speech and i enjoyed reading it.

JASMINE ~"L!L0"~ said...

Jasmine Cano
English 103
Cerritos College
Post # idk

I FEEL SO BEHIND ON EVERYTHING. MY LIFE IS SO UGH RIGHT NOW. THIS WAS THE WORST AND SORT OF BEST WEEKEND EVER!!!
IM HAVING A BOY!!!BUT IN THE MIST OF ALL THAT EXCITEMENT MY DAD...DADDY IS IN JAIL. I HATE IT HE WAS AT THE WRONG PLACE AT THE WRONG TIME!
I KNOW EVERYONE SAYS THAT THEY ARE NOT GUILTY,BUT HE REALLY IS NOT GUILTY. THE PERSON WHO IS WAS A PERSON HE THOUGHT OF AS A FRIEND AND A GOOD PERSON. I AM NOT THAT WORRIED THOUGH I KNOW EVERYTHING WILL GET CLEARED UP AND MY DADDY WILL BE HOME TOMORROW!!!
I LOVE YOU DAD!!!=(=(=(<3<3<3

JASMINE ~"L!L0"~ said...

Jasmine Cano
English 103
Cerritos College
Post # idk

I FEEL SO BEHIND ON EVERYTHING. MY LIFE IS SO UGH RIGHT NOW. THIS WAS THE WORST AND SORT OF BEST WEEKEND EVER!!!
IM HAVING A BOY!!!BUT IN THE MIST OF ALL THAT EXCITEMENT MY DAD...DADDY IS IN JAIL. I HATE IT HE WAS AT THE WRONG PLACE AT THE WRONG TIME!
I KNOW EVERYONE SAYS THAT THEY ARE NOT GUILTY,BUT HE REALLY IS NOT GUILTY. THE PERSON WHO IS WAS A PERSON HE THOUGHT OF AS A FRIEND AND A GOOD PERSON. I AM NOT THAT WORRIED THOUGH I KNOW EVERYTHING WILL GET CLEARED UP AND MY DADDY WILL BE HOME TOMORROW!!!
I LOVE YOU DAD!!!=(=(=(<3<3<3

J! said...

Jonathan Aguilar
English 103
Cerritos College
Post #19

Writing Process

I can definitely say without a doubt that this english class has been my busiest and most difficult one. Writing an essay on Homonyms was ridiculously hard for me. First, i didn't understand the story all that well the first twenty times i read it. But what helped me understand it better was discussion in class. Also, i have never been asked to write page long paragraphs before either. This was completely new to me and i felt overwhelmed with stress thinking that i would never be able to do it. But by simply doing what Mr. Hsiao asked to do and having the workshops it made these page long paragraphs easier for me to do. Some teachers just give you a dead line and want you to hand it in however you feel is correct. I believe Mr. Hsiao made it easier at least for me to keep up and finish this easy with more of a peace of mind by the way he scheduled everything. This did not make the essay easy at all, but it did make the process for me a little easier. I feel that i will be able to take a lot from this system of writing.

Charleen Chiang said...

Yi-Hui Chiang
English 103
Cerritos College
Post #13

Writing Process

It was difficult to write about myself because I found myself being afraid of thinking about the past. It is weird! I guess the reason could be that I have been trying to ignore those labels and criticism that people have given to me, and I refused to face the fact that I have been affected by them.

At first, me essay was all messed up. I was so confused that I wrote an introduction as my first paragraph, and of course the first paragraph became the second. Everything was all over the place. Then I had to restart all over again. I am still writing and thinking and looking into myself too see if there is anything I did not notice before about myself. It seems that there are still many contradictions in this paper. It takes time, and I am going to just keep working!

Going to class now, I think I'm gonna be late again! =(

Metallidude said...

Eric Contreras
Engl 103
Cerritos College
Post #11

I Have a Dream Speech

Martin Luther King Jr. gave a speech on August 23, 1968 from the steps of the Lincoln memorial. His speech is mostly about the freedom that he and his people are fighting for. His speech appeals to sources from the Bible, The Emanicpation Proclamation, The Declaration of Independance, and the US Constitution. He uses these phrases to enhance his speech that is about his march for freedom and the unity of america's citizens. He describes in his speech that America is a place where all men are created equal with equal rights and equal libertiesand that all men have "unalianable Rights" of "Life, Liberty, and the pursuit of happiness" He talks about how america has not changed, and how it has still over looked the civil liberties of the black man. There are a lot of metaphores and anaphoras that have a lot of meaning to this speech. It is extremely insprational, motivating, and pursuading to everyone who hears it and who relates to what he is saying.

Kevin said...

Kevin Santamaria
English 110
Golden West College
Post#12

The Writing Process

I have always liked writing especially if it involved my opinion. haha. I find the writing process relatively easy. It is basically how I do my essays in general. I have ideas everywhere and I begin to just type my essay. I move paragraphs around, insert things and take some things out. I usually do it within two to three days though Mr. H's way gives us more opportunity and time. He knows half the class would be up till 3am finishing it the night before otherwise. haha I like this process only because it is teaching me how to spread out my work over a period of time with the ability to look at it differently everyday, instead of the short time period I create for myself.

Yue said...

Yue Hayes
English 110
Golden West College
Post #16

Brandon
That's how I felt about you last year in class--Where have you been?! haha. All jokes aside, I've just been dealing with some things. Glad to be back though. :]

Arcelia
Yeah, Dominic is starting to feel better too. Thank goodness. I thought I was going to catch whatever he had, because that's what usually happens... But I'm not sick! :D ...Yet. I gotta knock on wood.

Jon
I'm pretty sure I've talked to you about your secrety secrets of your writing process, Jon...

Writing Process
I always have fun writing essays, because it challenges me to write well. It has to flow, it has to stay focused, and it has to make sense. It's very difficult to do especially in a lengthy essay. This essay in particular was very difficult for me to wrap my head around.

I'm not sure what to blame it on. Is it because it's our first essay in this class, or is it because the material we must relate our essay to is so dense? Or maybe it's the unusual chronological structure of the essay? Whatever the reason may be, it's been a challenge.

In other words, it's been really fun. I have been having a writer's block for the first half of our workshops... My paragraphs did not flow at all. They were very isolated from each other. Now I have figured out how to tie everything in, and it's been pretty rewarding to know that.

Now I just have to finish my essay. Which I'm very excited about, because I think it'll be a good first essay :]

Stephanie Wold said...

Stephanie Wold
English 110
GWC
Post #12

I'm throwing my older sister a going away party because she enlisted in the air foce and I was wondering if anyone can give me ideas on a location? I'm expecting 50 people, give or take. One idea I have is Dave & Busters. Any others? Thanks!

brenda flores said...

Brenda Flores
English 100
Cerritos College
Post #?

My writing process

I had such a hard time figuring out what I wanted to write abut and how I was going to put it all out on paper. I was so intimidated by what was expected of everyone that I figured I would not be able to pull it all off. Basically I broke down the paper into sections the way Mr. Hsaio did on the board for us one day. I am still having a hard time convincing my self that it is good enough to turn in. I am really terified to see a D or F. I hope everyone gets the grade they deserve and it matches the one they wanted.

Sans Nom said...

Danielle St. Onge
English 110
GWC
Post #10

My Writing Process

When I was younger, I used to LOVE writing. I wrote about everything that happened in my day ad even made up my own cute little fanatsy stories. As I got older, especially in h.s. when writing became mandatory I grew to dread the process. Now, in college, since I get to choose most of my classes, I do not find writing all that bad anymore. I am not going to lie, the first week of this class I started to freak out! I was like who is this teacher and why is he so strict! However, when Mr. Hsiao assigned the first body paragraph and basically told us how we are taking it step-by-step I was able to relax, a little bit. It is also very interesting how we get to write this essay in the first person, again I can relax. I also love how it can either be about our cave or a stereotype which helps me open up and get very personal. So my advice, just relax, this essay really is not that bad. :)

Jean Carlo said...

Jean Carlo Morales
English 100
Cerritos College
Post 8

The Writing Process.

My writing process for this essay was not as hard as other essays I had. I find it that it is very easy for me to do an essay where I talk about myself. I usually have harder time writing a research paper and putting it all together with the organizing and the comparing and contrasting and data and all this sort of complicated things. This first essay should be the easiest since it's the first one. Not only that but Mr. Hsiao basically broke it down for us step by step. He told us how many sentences he wants for every paragraph(Introduction and Conclusion), what he expects, and even gave us a sample essay. It's basically a "fill in the blanks" essay for me. One way I improve my paper is by reading it outloud to somebody or letting somebody else read it. What I do is look at their facial expressions and the feedback they give me. If i don't like what I see or hear then I know I need to work on it some more. I usually find it more helpful when I read it outloud to myself or someone else more helpful. This way I can tell if my paper flows well together sentence by sentence.

Sandra said...

Sandra Valadez
English 100
Cerritos College
post # 103

This writing process had been difficult for me. It is hard to filter through my feelings and get to the point of what I want to say. Comparing the past, to now, and what I see in the future. It has also been hard for when writing because when I write, I write according to how I feel at that moment. My feelings mix my thoughts and change from day to day. Even write now I cannot find what I want to spite out. A few days ago I had it all in my head and now, nothing. Maybe I should not have waited till now.

Kevin said...

Kevin Santamaria
English 110
Golden West College
Post #12
Obama's Acceptance Speech

I do not agree with Obama's ideals, therefore this blog is kind of hard for me without getting political; that is why I chose to do it first. Obama’s speech has a wonderful beginning. He bases his speech around hope trying to instill its meaning into the American people. He had a beautiful choice of words, thanks everyone, and renews old phrases from the constitution in his own words. He then eloquently recognizes the predicament we are stuck in, and his duties that are to be taken care of. He brought into perspective the soldiers on the other side of the world fighting for us at this very moment. My favorite paragraph is 19 because he does such a good job at painting pictures of situations. Palin ’12!

Yesica said...

Jessica Vasquez
English 100
Prof. Hsiao
Post #: ??

I thought I had already posted on this, but I didn’t see it.. so here it is…

My Writing Process

English has never been my best subject. I can read, but when it comes to writing I am horrible! My writing process consists of brainstorming ideas, then getting stuck with writers block. Have you ever felt like you can think of what you want to write about, but you can phrase it out on a sentence correctly???? That always happens to me.. I get good ideas, but I just don’t know how to write them out. Another thing is that I rush to finish. I know I could do a better job on my writing if I just took a little more time. I feel that due to my busy schedule, I spend less time in my homework. So far with this first essay, the problems that I’ve been having are arranging my sentences correctly. Since it’s a personal essay, I want to throw a bunch of sentences about the past and don’t realize how im mixing them up. Also, my spelling is horrible!! (Thank god for spell check!) That’s why i can always use someone to revise my work.

*If anyone needs someone to go over there work of is stuck, I’m free tomorrow. Please e-mail me and I would be happy to get together with some of you. We could all revise each others work and throw in some last minute ideas.

Martha Vazquez said...

Martha Vazquez
English 100
CC
Post 17

Writing Process

This is the first paper that I have written in about 5 years. I am pretty rusty at this. I'm rediscovering and dusting off my writing process. I discovered that my thoughts seem to be all over the place. Its a hard process to slow down and organize all my thoughts. I write whatever comes to mind, then when its all poured out, I butcher it. I cut and paste different pieces together. When its all together, I read it out loud to see if it makes any sense. If it does, I have other people read it, and get thier feedback. Thats pretty much the whole process. I hope it works...

cathrina86 said...

cathrina afusia
cerritos college
english 100

Well I just got off work! What a terrible Monday it was. Oh yeah did I mention I am still sick :( Hopefully I get better :) I was just reading over everyones post regarding the writing assignment, and could totally agree with some when they advised it is hard. Sometimes it is hard to just sit down and write. I always take my assignment and think about it throughout my day. I think about how I would like my paper to flow and what message do I really want to get across to my reader. Try keeping a little notepad and pen with you at all times, and try writing down the thoughts you have during the day. At the end of the day review what you have written in that notepad. Many will be so surprised how many things we think about in one given day. This was just an excersice I was asked to do one day, and I do it every now and then. Well I will see everyone soon.

Raul said...

Raul Moreno Jr
English 103
Cerritos College
Post: 13

The Process

I'm not sure you could call the chaos that precedes a paper for me a process. It has little order for hours and hours inside my head before I even come close to getting down an outline or thesis. I will say though, that my "process" is a microcosm of my every day life experiences. I take ages to come to a thesis, but once I get there, I already know how to get there. To analyze it further, I would say that I work backwards rifling through points and arguments in my head before I can even come to what exactly I want to say or argue. To put this down in order is just crazy. It's a very chaotic and anxiety inducing process for me, but once I've got a thesis then the floodwaters come through. I find this to be stressful, and I am unsure if this is just a manifestation of my procrastination. Either way, it's served me well in my writings.
My editing process is best served when I can take a day or two away from the writing altogether to objectively critique my work, but my method doesn't always allow for this.
I've got this love hate relationship with the writing process, but in the end, I really enjoy communicating effectively what I mean to say to other.

CaLL ME P :D said...

Priscilla Daza
Cerritos college
English 100
post #13

jaime: i know when i wrote my first essay on my cave with mister hsiao this past spring semester it was the most stress time ever! i would stay up late after work or school and work on my paper. yahoo messenging a friend whos major is english and asking him what allegory of the cave meant and what not. man! it was tough but hang in there! about the ICDC's and what not...the formulas will be engraved in your mind by the end of the semester!!

Adrien: dude i feel the same way. i have read my paper so many times, rearranging sentences, adding and taking out stuff. it still does not seem like a great paper to me yet. unlike you i have not let anyone else read my paper. i should but i guess i am little selfish with it. the only ones that have read my paper are of course the peps in my group. no surprise there right?? well i have no doubt that your paper will be AWESOME!

JENNY: it was so great seeing you at my job...AGAIN! i really just wanted to pull a chair and sit with you and your man and just talk. maybe order a drink. haha no but on the real i like running into people i know at work. only sometimes when i dont feel like working i just want to sit down and hang out with them. i get out from work so late sometimes that its too late to do anything. im glad you "love" the parmesan chicken. its one of our popular entrees :D

Antonio said...

Antonio Acosta
English 100
Cerritos College
Post # ?

My paper is almost done. I am having trouble with writing a thesis. No matter what I write does not sound good. My mom is a teacher and she helps me with my paper. The problem is that she wants me to write a thesis and she will look over it. I read my paper to find what my paper is mostly about but my thesis always comes out poetic.

whitneyyoung said...

Whitney Young
Golden West Collehe
English 110
Post #11

I Have a Dream by Martin Luther King Jr.

I really enjoyed reading Martin Luther King Jr’s speech. I have listened to the recording a few yeas back and it really touched me then. Reading it again made an even bigger impact on me. There were parts that I had forgotten about or did not understand last time I read it. It is so amazing to see how someone that has been surrounded by so much hatred was able to surpass the hatred and see the best in people. Even though his speech talks about how horrible they were treated, he is still so positive about seeing a change in people. I believe he is one of those people that have reached enlightenment and is able to share it with other people. My favorite part is probably when he talks about how he wants his children to one day live in a nation where they will not be judged by the color of their skin, but the content of their character. It really shows how a person’s skin color does not prove anything about them but their race. Everyone should be treated equally regardless. His speech is so inspirational.

whitneyyoung said...

Whitney Young
Golden West College
English 110
Post #12

The process of writing this first essay has been pretty difficult. I thought that Professor Hsiao wanted three different incidents of being stereotyped, but I did not know he wanted them to somehow be linked. That was probably the most challenging part. I had to rewrite part of my essay. After being able to find a link between each body paragraph, it did get easier. I actually enjoy writing with a lot of detail now. I used to always write to get straight to the point. Being in Professor Hsiao’s English class has definitely changed the way I write essays. When it comes to something personal, it is almost therapeutic. His essays are not too terrible. Just remember to check for run-ons and fragments!

Ronnnn said...

Ronald Cabiltes
English 110
GWC
Post #10

Writing Process
This first essay has been one crazy ride. First off it was really tough opening up and writing about a personal event. After writing the first paragraph though it became pretty easy. Also it takes awhile for me to actually start an essay. I'm sure everyone has this problem when typing up an essay. It seems to take forever for me to come up with a topic sentence or a thesis. After I get one though, it's smooth sailing...kind of. Adding very very detailed events has also been a bit difficult. I have never been asked to put so much detail into a paragraph. Overall, this writing process has taught me a lot. The use of very fine details helps in my biology and chemistry classes when we have to observe and jot down details of that observation.

Sans Nom said...

Danielle St. Onge
English 110
GWC
Post #11

OBAMA!

(too bad I was too young to vote in the last election. oh well, he still won! :))

My parents have always told (for some random reason) that the President of the US never writes his own speeches (spelling?). I am finding this hard to believe and have always thought, wow is the President really that high up that he is incapable of writing his own speech? However, when I read President Obama's speech I was rather in awe. Whether Obama himself wrote it or not, it was so thankful and inspiring that I found it remarkable. I love how he first thanked Senator McCain and Govenor Palin before anyone. Then even talks about his daughters. The part that most caught my attention was when he was talking Ann Nixon Cooper and how she has lived through so much during her onehundred and six years of life. This part made me think, wow maybe Obama really does care about the people and what we have been through, and his whole speech is not just 'talk'. So, thank YOU Obama for opening up my eyes, and maybe next time that ballot comes around (and i'm FINALLY old enough!) i'll vote for you (if you don't screw things up, of course. :)).

Thomas Rios said...

Thomas Rios
GWC
English 110
Post #11?

Writing Process

Being a former student of Mr. Hsiao's, I kind of knew what to expect regarding writing papers. I found it to be confusing at first, (I wrote on the completely wrong prompt) but found few problems after. I am familiar with the way Mr. Hsiao structures his papers, so I wasn't suprised by that. Writing has come easy to me, however, writing correctly is a bit more work. I'm not sure if the quotes I chose are completely relevant, I tried to choose the ones that best fit my situation. I know that if students encounter any problems, they can email Mr. Hsiao and he usually replies rather quickly (thank you for that!)

Anonymous said...

Dalene Kolb
English 110
Golden West College
Post# 31

I Have A Dream:
What can you say about a speech so well written? Martin Luther King's speech could not be stated any better. He had a dream that this country would be a better country than what it was. That blacks will be treated equal. That everyone will have the same rights. But that dream has not come true. Yes we have a black president, but his dream was never fufilled. No one is treated equal. If anything we have more sterotypes and racist going on than we had when King was alive. I wish that I could say his dream came true, but it has not, and I do not believe it ever will. That is until people stop looking at what is on the outside, and get to know the real person. People are to quick to judge by the color of someone's skin, than by how the person is in general. When King said "cashing the check" in his speech, he was saying to have racist stoped. Well it has never been cashed. People are still waiting at the bank, but the amount on the screen always says "insufficient funds". It is sad that we still have the hate going on to this day. Will it ever end? In my opinion, no. You can not change a person who does not want to be changed.

Well that was my opinion about the speech. What do you guys think?

~Dalene

Erica said...

Erica Lloyd
English 110
GWC
Post #11

Reflection on Writing

So writing this essay has been very interesting. I've really enjoyed that we had to write one paragraph at a time. I tend to procrastinate, and this has made me really commit to getting the essay done. I also really liked the workshops because for each paragraph I was really unsure about what was expected of me and the workshops helped me to sort that out.

All in all, the hardest part of this essay for me has been trying to find something to write about. It's hard for me to share myself and I've been searching for things that I am okay with sharing. I'm also still a bit stuck on fixing my third paragraph, but that's probably because I haven't had very much time to devote to it. Hopefully that will change this week.

Anonymous said...

Dalene Kolb
English 110
Golden West College
Post #32

Well since everytime we write something on Blogger and then go to class, Mr. Hsiao says to write on the thing we have yet to write on. So here is my opinion about Obama's speech.

Barack Obama Speech:
Well this speech is nothing like King's speech. I was not very happy with Obama's speech. I do not believe he lived up to what he has said. And yes I know Mr. Hsiao said not to get into a political dicussion, so I will not. But personally I voted for Hilary Clinton because I feel she would be able to handle the position better. And I still believe that. Saying "Yes we can" does not mean you can. Nothing has changed, or from what I have seen. He also said we have come so far, and really we have not. Nothing has changed. There is still hate, and war going on. The country owns even more money than what we did before he got into office. There is more people without jobs than ever before. How is that saying we have come so far? Being in a war, that is never ending, and having our men and women fight literal to the death has made everything worse. People are dying left and right and nothing is changing. Things are worse. Such a supposly great president would fix this, you would think. The one thing that is true in his speech is saying that the road ahead will be long. But hasn't other people said that before? When is this road suppose to end? Never ending? Nothing has changed, things have gotten worse. Yes it takes a while to fix, but when you have millions going homeless something is wrong. I think his speech was a fake. His speech was to get people on his side, but he has yet to fufill his promise to all his followers. Do something fast before you lose more respect. Obama yes we can, but when?

Again my opinion.

~Dalene

marlilou said...

Beatrice Fisher
Eng 110
GWC
Post #10

Wow! So I’m sure we’ve all heard Martin Luther King Jr.’s I Have A Dream speech at one point and time before. But actually reading it word for word in its entirety, I have never done that. I thought, more than moving and inspirational, it was absolutely beautiful. I was reading and all the while thinking, “wow, he was a poet”. There were many metaphors I underlined while reading. Lines such as, “…a lonely island of poverty in the midst of a vast ocean of material prosperity” or, “tranquilizing drug of gradualism” or, “jangling discords of our nation into a beautiful symphony of brotherhood” made me shake my head and smile in admiration. I loved the comparison between the “sunlit path of racial justice” and, “the quicksands of racial injustice”. Like I said before, I’ve heard this speech countless times over my 30 years, but reading it was different. I feel fortunate that I didn’t have to live in that time where racial discrimination was the norm. I also feel it is unfortunate that even today it still exists. I love that I grew up here in southern California where there is a lot more racial diversity than in other places in the US. My husband, Josh, and I have spoken many times about moving out of state to places like Oregon or Colorado. We think it would be nice to live in a place where there is more nature at our fingertips and a slower pace of life. But I often have doubt because I realize that we would be sacrificing the diversity that we so appreciate. Who knows? Maybe there is that place where I can have both, but as of now, I have yet to find it.

Ronnnn said...

Ronald Cabiltes
English 110
GWC
post #11

I have a dream
Martin Luther King Jr. was one the most influential and a great man. He was the center the passive movement for equal rights during his time. His speech is a very powerful speech in my opinion. The title of his speech says it all. Martin Luther King had a dream. He dreamed for a country where no one was discriminated or stereotyped by the color of their skin. It is sad that even the present day Martin Luther King's dream is far from being fulfilled. Even though minorities have advanced through society, there is still some discrimination happening. Discrimination today is very subtle and not as public as the period of civil rights movement. Some jobs may still deny someone work because of their race, but may use a different reason. I am not saying MLK didn't do anything for equal rights. He was very influential and was probably one of the reasons many institutions became desegregated. I still think MLK was the man when it came to the equal rights movement and did a lot for the blacks and minorities that were discriminated.

Erica said...

Erica Lloyd
English 110
GWC
Post #12

I Have A Dream

If we read this out loud in class tomorrow, I might cry. Whenever I read assignments, I try to read them out loud because reading out loud helps me stay focused and keeps my mind from wandering. Reading MLK's speech out loud honestly made me cry, because it is so powerful and heartwrenching. I don't know how you could read it and not be touched. Although I am not black, I do know what it feels like to be persecuted and to have rights denied. MLK gave this speech years ago, but I think that it can still be used today to apply to new situations. We're still fighting for equality, just in different ways now. I think this speech is a "great beacon light of hope" for all those who are still struggling for equality.

I would like to think that things have improved since MLK gave this speech, and that in most ways his dreams have become a reality. I know that our country isn't free of racism yet, but every generation we get closer. I can remember in first or second grade my school had an assembly where we were read paragraph 15 to the end of this powerful speech. I still remember that assembly, even though at the time I wasn't really comprehending the meaning of the words. I thought it was pretty obvious that everyone was equal and I didn't understand that it wasn't always like that and that there were people who didn't agree. I hurts me deeply to know that there are intolerant people in the world who would judge another human being as less than themselves. I believe that one day we will get to that place where everyone is truly equal, but it is still a long way off.

kngockngock said...

Tien Tran
English 110
GWC
Post # 12

Martin Luther King Jr.


Martin Luther King Jr.’s historic speech is absolutely representative of the raging time during that era. His strong oratory voice is powerful and enigmatic that draws in the reader to feel the ongoing struggles that plagues those of African descent. He perfectly ties in the root of this country to present time and how it should continue to live by its creed. I personally like his repetitious phrases and how it shakes the heart of those listening. His speech also alludes to the discriminatory acts against African Americans, but at the same time, he professionally does not attack them. In the end, his last sentence calls out freedom for not only African Americans, but for the entire human race.

kngockngock said...

Tien Tran
English 110
GWC
Post #13

The Writing Process

I have to admit, writing this paper was not an easy task. My last English class was over a year ago, thus it has been quite a long time since I’ve produced a full-blown essay. The content of the paper also required a deep process of thinking as it makes you delve into your innermost cave and secrets. In doing so, your emotion will be casted alongside your words highlighting the authenticity and the diction driven language of the paper. Because of this, you cannot just make up a story and call it a done deal. You have to put your all into your paper so that it becomes you, not a fictional character. The process of developing your own story slowly induces you to analyze what is at question, which in my case is stereotyping. All in all, the process was a long and difficult one for me, but in the end, it opened up a new perspective on “classes” and its homonymous meaning.

kayla said...

Kayla Marley
English 110
Golden West
Post 13
Acceptance Speech by President Barack Obama
Just under a year ago our nation elected the first African American for president. Barack Obama was elected for president in November 2008 when he gave a magnificent acceptance speech. An acceptance speech recited so well with such precision to touch the lives of many American citizens. Obama gave this speech with such passion and class. I thought it was so cute how President Obama thanked his wife for being by his side the entire way through the race. I love how he made his speech not only about who he wanted to thank but also about all the citizens that voted for him. He thanked everyone who supported him throughout the race. President Obama talked about how the road to the future was going to be hard, but that everyone will have the opportunity to be heard. During this speech you can see that Obama really cares about this country, and I am glad that we have a President who loves to interact with the citizens of the amazing and beautiful United States of America.

Writing the First Essay
I love writing. I find writing an escape and sometimes even a challenge. I was really excited to write this essay. Being in Mr. Hsiao’s high school class and a college class I have learned how to write an essay to make the sentences flow better. I actually found this essay a lot tougher than any other one’s he has had assigned to any of my classes. I think that I found this essay much harder because the essay is about me. I was really uncomfortable about writing this essay because I do not like to talk about my insecurities. This was definitely a challenge, but I am glad I wrote the essay.

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